The Fountain

The Fountain

A Poem by Ameli

Once beautiful now lying
Broken.
Misery etched in the dreary gray stone
Thinking back, back
To clear flowing water, brilliant aquamarine
From pure joyous past
Now weakly, slowly crawling
Rivulets
That have lost the will
To carry on
When hope ceases to exist
Tell me,
What will happen?

© 2013 Ameli


Author's Note

Ameli
I make an attempt to make something more creative and cryptic(?)...I believe I need more work. There's a lack of punctuation because I made it that way but maybe I should've added it properly...oh well, if need be I'll redo it.

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Added on March 4, 2013
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Ameli
Ameli

Panama City, FL



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Hello everyone~ I joined hoping to get some feedback on my writing cause I'm too shy to show it to people in real life... Ameli is my pen name cause I like to stay a secret~ I hope my writing will .. more..

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