Precious

Precious

A Poem by Ameli

Our hearts pulled by the allure,

The taste of something new,

We took from forbidden fruit,

First you and then I.

What should be wrong however,

Seems to feel so perfectly right.

We have a secret,

Precious secret,

Only the two of us share.

It is whispered between us

through each soft touch of our lips,

When our hearts beat as one,

Through gentle embrace.

It is a lovely, sweet secret

Forbidden to share.

© 2012 Ameli


Author's Note

Ameli
Originally this was titled 'Secret' until I realized I already had a poem with that name...I suppose you can say this one came from my imagination because one day I had the sudden idea to write a poem not based on me but on others this time and once I get an idea it doesn't leave me alone till I put it to paper so...this is what came of it. Please tell me how it is because it was harder to write about something like this and I don't tend to do well writing love related poems of somewhat happier themes.

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Added on October 7, 2012
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Ameli
Ameli

Panama City, FL



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