Why won't you listen to me?

i wrote this when my first boyfriend broke up with me.... but stuff in the poem has nothing to do with him.... :)

 There are lots of reasons, I can't tell you why. When I tried to speak, I always got shut up. I try to scream, but my voice is not heard. I walk away, but yet no one follows. I held you hand, but you let go of mine. My hearing is shot, but yet you talked. When I spoke, I was heard, but not understood. When I loved, I got shunned. When I got closer, you pushed me away. When you hated, I loved. When I asked questions, you lied. When you killed me, I died. If I came back to life, you wouldn't care. When I cut you didn't care. When you hit me I cried. When I hugged you, you declined. When you wanted me closer, you pushed me away. There are so many answers, so little time. You never loved me, just used me. So now that I'm dead, cry all you want, because you realize that you were wrong. 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The Devil's Own B***h]

Whoa!!!!!! This is fantastic!!!! I loved the flow of this and the emotions that pulsated throughout.

Brilliant write!!!!

Josie

[Heather Mason]

thank you so much!!!!!!!!!! :)

[nocturnalbeast]

wow.!! This is really nice!. I love your writing style!.

[The Lady Anasteja]

Passionate, and a bit angry. The roll of the world. Isn't that how life goes, never wanting something at the time another does.

[Heather Mason]

hey thank you! :)

[unspokenguilt]

Very bold...i like it, alot!

[Rachel Cooper]

wow...that's some powerful stuff stuff, man.

It's raw. It's angry. It's sad. And it's beautiful.

Very, very well done.

[Ammietia]

Powerful and full of meaning. I can relate to a lot of this.