A Mad Hatter's Love

Its a love poem form the Mad Hatter to Alice. I swear, they need to get together!

Some say I'm a little mad,

but I halfly disagree,

I perfer to stand on the line,

between sane and insanity.

 

 

 

 

Another cup of tea,

sitting here in my merry way,

celebrating yet another,

very merry unbirthday.

 

 

 

 

The March Hare is here,

singing loud beside me,

I'm hidden in a Wonderland,

Where no one could ever find me.

 

 

 

 

Listening to the flowers sing,

"A Golden Afternoon" it is indeed,

But not for the reason,

Her majesty might think.

 

 

 

 

That is when I saw her,

With teary terror stricken eyes,

She was in need of our assistance,

Much to my surprise.

 

 

 

 

And Oh, was she a sight!

 

 

 

 

Golden sun kissed hair,

That rolled down her back,

Beauty was one thing,

this maiden did not lack.

 

 

 

 

Her skin so pale,

like the White Rabbit's fur,

an exterior so at ease,

the Caterpillar had nothing on her.

 

 

 

 

Her arms so slender,

and breasts so humble,

I had to watch my words,

for fear I might fumble.

 

 

 

 

I stared deeply into those eyes,

and awed at those big red lips,

wishing to touch those fragile shoulders,

and hold those delicate hips.

 

 

 

Long seductive eyelashes,

Batting in such a way,

and then I saw her smile,

completing my unbirthday.

 

 

 

 

I had to know what it's like,

to have her lying next to me,

to experience that moment,

Of pure ecstacy.

 

 

 

 

To make her close

those big blue eyes,

and be madly in love,

for the rest of our lives.

 

 

 

She had to know I loved her,

I wished to make her mine,

before she dissapeared forever,

becoming a spirit of my mind.

 

 

 

 

But she was looking for a way out,

and I was trying to get in,

to hold her in my arms,

to feel her kiss agianst my skin.

 

 

 

 

I truly loved her,

that theres was no doubt,

in this crazy, fucked up world,

She's the only one I'm mad about.

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this creative and kind of a demented piece but very cool liked the concept of this piece alot.... liked how you added in some of the characters too.... overall a very interesting write .... going in favs... fav lines...Golden sun kissed hair,
That rolled down her back,
Beauty was one thing,
this maiden did not lack.




Her skin so pale,
like the White Rabbit's fur,
an exterior so at ease,
the Caterpillar had nothing on her.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I can't even pick my favorite lines because I loved them them all.

[HorrorMaster]

Very good, I love this one.

[Eric Cox]

Excellent poem. Written well. A cool and dark write.

[deeps]

The March Hare is here,
singing loud beside me,
I'm hidden in a Wonderland,
Where no one could ever find me.

Love these lines here, This is a very well written here
I throughly enjoye dthis write. Very interseting i must say.
Enjoyable read.

[Tina Kline]

Very clever indeep. Kind of dark and creepy in a way but that's what makes it such a great piece.
The rhyme is excellent and so is the flow of this piece.
Enjoyed it. You have skill and talen, that's for sure!!

[Holly]

HOOOOOOLLLLYYYYY SSSHIIIITTTTT!!!!!! YOU DIDN'T BRING THIS TO SCHOOL FOR ME TO READ!!!!!! I HATE YOU! No no. Just jk. But really Tori, you know I'd be insane about this one! Ugh. So much wasted time... Tisk tisk. I loved it though. Completely and utterly. You were a little preverted and need to change "form" to "from" in your intro fore nothing this wonderful should have even such a small flaw as a typo. Even in my craze of this movie you didn't bring it. OR for that matter let me read it at your house! How shall you ever live with yourself. Ugh. Beautiful piece.

[Cassandra D.]

This is a very good poem. It's both creative and interesting.
The picture was a very good choice, lol.
Anyways, this was a very good poem!

[Ich bin das Giftmä..]

Funny I did love the picture you used

[revenant21]

I love it, Tori!!!! It is awesome! I love the way you brought all of the stuff from the story into the poem, you brought it to life, such great description, I love it, Tori. Alice In Wonderland To The END!!!!

[Georgia Gypsy]

This is fun and inventive....a little creepy. but with johnny depp in the roll i could see this as very plausible...
great job,
so glad you shared, the rhyme was right on.
keep up the great work!