Two Black Hearts

You're a liar,

I'm a deciver,

You're unfaithful,

I'm a cheater.

You have no trust,

I have no faith,

you despise,

I choose to hate.

You are selfish,

I am greedy,

you are helpless,

I am needy.

You are spineless,

I'm a coward,

You're in control,

I'm empowered.

It's joyous to know,

I'm not alone,

you're not the only one,

who feels so low.

When the night is dark,

and there is no sun,

our two black hearts,

are better than one.

Reviews

[revenant21]

Take that b*TCHESS!! IM the first to review!!! AAAWWWWW< TORI!!! i loved it!. It was absolutely awesome. You have such wonderful poetry. There's a thingy I entered in seventh grade that got me published in a poetry book. You should enter it if it's available for you. And theres always self-publishing, I've been thinking of that myself, perhaps a book of short stories.......*snaps out of trance* So *anyways* back to you. I love the way you went back and forth between the two, it was very good, tori. You have very wonderful writing abilities, I love your poems, and your stories. I hope you continue to write all your life, and if you do so, I will be faithful and continue to read! Very good job, my friend. Bellement nior, my friend, bellement nior.

[Cassiopia Summers]

The way you flip back and forth between the two is purely amazing. Great write.

[Cassandra D.]

I liked this poem :)
It was awesome, terrific, cool, great, (anything else that means very good)!