Thunderstorms

Storms that burn with passionate rage, hold nothing less than a useless cage.

Being in love with you,

is like that feeling right before a storm.

Even with the dark, menacing clouds

My spirits cannot be torn.

Even with destruction so close,

and staring me in the face,

I just can't help but crave,

that horrific embrace.

It feels as if the lightning struck me,

every atom in me fully charged,

Where I should be crying,

I'm standing firm and hard.

The love you give me,

may make others mourn,

but I only get this kind of power,

in your raging storm.

It's like a sudden rush,

I feel I could run forever,

No matter what you throw at me,

I'll never stop. Never.

Your wind twisting through my hair,

I feel as if I'm flying.

And In a way I know will,

As long as I keep trying.

The world zooms past me in a blur,

I can't see where I'm going.

I am only aware of your love,

and the excitment you are blowing.

My dear,

If you are a simple storm,

ready to unleash your fury,

ready to make me worn.

I'll stand tall through everything,

the darkness keeping me cloaked.

If you're a mercieless storm,

then I'm ready to be soaked.

I'll dance and splash,

in your rain.

No matter what you do,

you could never bring me pain.

I'm ready to scream with your thunder,

and run with your wind,

hoping that this stormy night

will never ever end.

 

Reviews

[revenant21]

I loved it! WHo's it about? jk. Unless it *is* about someone, then you need to dish girlfriend. lol jkjkjkjk. huhhhh. So hyper. But i really liked the poem! Great job, Tori

[Lunar Lightning]

Wow... this is a very powerful peice and very full of emotion. Very nicely formatted and worded. I love it when you can feel the emotion is someone's writing as you read it. Absolutely magnificant. Keep on writing!

Luna