Perhaps

Ya...it kind of sucks. It talks about a girl saying no to a boy, he gets pissed, starts beating her, and she's ready to give up. Yup.

Perhaps who you see,

isn't who you think.

Perhaps I'm moving to fast,

Perhaps I shouldn't blink.

What's the pointing in waiting,

when all you do is wonder?

I'm looking for the lighting,

and all you have is thunder.

Did that make you angry?

Did it make you want to scream?

When I first said no,

did you not know what I mean?

Is that why you hurt me,

you broke me down?

Is that why you say I'm worthless,

better off underground?

All that pain you made me feel,

just because you wanted this to be real?

You know,

Perhaps I'll take your advice,

since I'm hurting on the inside.

Perhaps I'll just crawl into a corner,

and just wait to die.

Perhaps.

Reviews

[Deleted]

The beginning was actually pretty good! Don't be so down on your writing. The rhyming and rhythm were fantastic.
Great job!

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing poem! It was a very powerful and emotion filled piece of writing! I loved it! :D