Fall

Seasons. they come and go. Just like your love.

Here be the day the leaves fall down,

and pull upon themselves, coats of brown.

The crisp sensation of golden scent around,

For eternity, I wish it was bound.

Yellow wood with fiery tips,

a breath of chill upon thy lips.

The shriveled leaves crunch beneath my feet,

a more amorous sound, I shall not meet.

The estacy it brings with thee,

shows but not it's willful plea.

As it turns and sways my heart with glee.

All though there be a many seasons,

A love for fall I feel with unknown reasons.

A tender parcel yet you carry,

Through the wind,

the sound so merry.

Winter nips at it's toes,

trees go bare as the wind blows.

Frost blistering at it's side,

Colors vanish in amazing stride.

Oh fall, please stay upon thy will,

and rest evermore, beneath my sill.

 

Reviews

[Vertigo]

Great write! I love love love autumn its my favorite season

[Zak]

The second time I read this, Tori, I felt as if I was being pulled in, as if I knew exactly what you were trying to say, as if you put your heart into this poem when you wrote it. I love how the theme is compared with love, and you relate them all to being...chilly. I don't write poetry very well, but I can see that you do it with care. I was amazed!

-ZTF

[Jetta Zippora]

I love this! Beautiful language, and very lively! Nice write, friend! :)