Waiting Fate

Fate is waiting for you.

The darkness is rising,

the lights are all fading,

there is no denying,

the fate that is waiting.

Try as hard as you can,

you can't run away,

I'll find you somehow,

I'll find you someway.

Your scent's in the air,

I sense it everywhere,

My mind is so absolute,

it's you I will consume.

Your blood taste so sweet,

when it drains from you as I feed.

Scream as hard as you can,

you're now in my hands.

There's no one to save you,

no light to help you.

My lips on your skin,

as you beg...again and again.

Drinking your blood by the litter,

there's nothing much sweeter,

than the tears that you cry,

We're already dead, you and I.

Reviews

[Anonymity,]

Very dark, obviousely, but what impresses me the most is the flow of this poem it almost forces you to the next line and I had no trouble obeying. This piece was shear genius.

[Zak]

gaw...that last part got me. Blood...*shiver* Very dark and it carries...power and substance. Poetry pwnage in this piece. XD The last part just puts it all away for us.

-ZTF

[Lyzzy Redd]

Whoa... very intense and descriptive. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! AMAZING JOB! =)