Like The Leafs Change

thanksgiving gets to us all

 

Like the leafs Change

 

When the season comes,

The leafs start to change.

 

When the season comes,

The trees get ready for their winter slumber.

 

When the season comes,

Mother Nature welcomes Jack Frost with open arms.

 

When the season comes,

The canvas of the white ground is awoken by vivid colors.

 

When the season comes,

The birds spread their wings for the journey south.

 

When the season comes,

The bears, squirrels, and foxes eat there fill for the long road of sleep ahead of them.

 

When the season comes,

The water gets cold and solid and the fish run deep.

 

When the season comes,

The warm fire burns from every home.

 

When the season comes,

When families come from a far to feast.

 

When the season comes,

It goes like the leafs change.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

its a great thing to write about!

Reviews

[Alisha Mark]

I was bored, honestly. Too much repetition for me. Possibly, breaking it up into each season and having four stanzas with the work you've presented. For instance, "When the season comes,// the leafs start to change,// the trees [prepare] for their winter slumber. |/| When the season comes,...........//" And so forth. I feel like you'd put an emphasis on the changing seasons as oppose to the season changing. I think, in my opinion, that's what you were trying to emphasize on anywho.

[QuietPoet]

Where is the rest of it?? Seems like you wanted to add more, but you forgot the end..

But this was good, I liked it and it is a great thing to write about. =)