Friendship

Friendship

A Poem by C.J.
"

i am doing this for a friend that has been good to me for a long time.

"

Friendship

Agreement doesn't always come,

a path of fights with no meaning,

yet happiness is always there.

 

A love which runs deep,

 when their life is more important then that of your own,

the thought's of them are never-ending.

 

An unbreakable bond between two people,

where trust is the heart,

death rather than the break of loyalty.

 

Friendship lasts for an eternity.

© 2008 C.J.


Author's Note

C.J.
tell me what you think!
i want to thank Fran Marie with all the help she gave me to make this poem better thankyou!

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This is so true. This poem makes one appreciate the beauty of friendship.

Fav line: 'a path of fights with no meaning'. I can really relate to this.

You seem to have a typo there though, shouldn't it be 'thoughts' instead of 'thought's'?

I don't read many poems but I like this one. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!! You did a great job with this poem and it is very touching!! Everything you said is SO true. Great job!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like your finished poem it all comes together quite nicely~

and your welcome my friend~THanks for sharing your lovely poem on friendship

Fran Marie



Posted 16 Years Ago


I like it. Friendship is a beautiful thing a person can have. Friends are always helpful. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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