The Reasons I Love You

well this one was not easy love poems are not my thing.

The Reasons I Love You

Your intensifying beauty struck me with one look.

You walked with the pride of a queen.

When I looked into your eyes,

they shown with the birth of the blazing morning sky.

Your smile was as bright,

 as the blanket of stars in the nights domain.

Your hair was as smooth as the rivers current.

When you spoke your words were as soft as,

 the pedals of the reddest rose.

I knew in an instant that I needed you,

and I felt you needed me too.

When you walked away my heart went with you.

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

wow. this was beautifully written.
My favorite part was:
"You walked with the pride of a queen.
When I looked into your eyes,
they shown with the birth of the blazing morning sky.
Your smile was as bright,
as the blanket of stars in the nights domain."
Great job.
I'm giving you an around of applause.

[J.Black]

For a thirteen year old, your flippin' brilliant!

[Samantha.]

dang boi i thought you said loveee poems werent your thing
that was like serious poet power
*koodos* ;o

[Seriana]

Well, for not being your thing, I think you did a fabulous job. This was very sweet and heart-felt.
One small change, pedals = petals :)
I love the last line. That really sums it up, doesn't it? Beautifully written. :)

[Bliss]

Beautifully written.

[unspokenguilt]

captivating really good "love poems are not my thing" you could of fooled me

[QuietPoet]

Its beautiful. You did a good job. You used meaningful words. Great write.

[<3 the Jonas Boys]

Wow!!!! This poem is amazing. Its so beautiful. You did a great job with the words you chose to use. This poem tells anyone that reads it what its like to be in love and that's amazing. Great work!!