The Rose From My Heart

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The Rose From My Heart

My heart sang the moment i laid eyes on you.

My heart flew when you looked at me.

So on the upcoming day I plea to you.

Take this rose from my heart that is aching for you.

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Helena]

Very sweet and lovely! You had me at The Rose.....
My favorite flower! Well done.

~ Helena ~

[Tammy]

Good write...

[C. C. Burl]

I love this! Especially the last line, the aching heart. I know it. Thank you for the poem. You're a wonderful, amazing writer. Keep it up. Flora.

[unspokenguilt]

Ahh I love this one...but what if the rose pricks? I'll answer my own question...I bleed. It doesn't mean it isn't tempting though.

[Nely Amorim]

This is a great piece on its own but so much potential for more. I thank you for entering my contest:)

[QuietPoet]

I think this is good. But you should add more. Its such a great beginning.