.Death.

.Death.

 

People fear it

People love it

.Death.

 

It's just a word to some

A deep meaning to others

.Death.

 

You can accept it

Or try to deny it

.Death.

 

It can be mind consuming

Or just a floating thought

.Death.

I welcome you.

Reviews

[Silera Martin]

i really liked how you wrote the two seperate ways people view death. Also, how you didnt write much which made the poem stand out with meaning. :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

Its nihilistic and zen all at the same time.. I love it..


'it can be mind consuming
Or just a floating thought
.Death.

I welcome you.'


That whole portion sealed the deal for me.. Great stuff..

[Pookie]

Wonderful piece. Little words, big meaning. Sometimes I wonder which side I'm on. And I accept it and its sometimes consuming and I love it. But I'll never meet it. Not yet. My favorite line will have to be "It's just a word to some
A deep meaning to others" This is like its own story. Its a gate way just waiting to be opened. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read some more of your work.
-----------> Grim Reaper.

[Coyote Poetry]

Old Native American wisdom. Death is always near. If you look quick enough. He is on your left shoulder. A excellent poem. A pleasure to read.
Coyotye

[Secret Addiction]

Great work!! Can't wait to read more of your work!!

[_!Alex!_]

interesting very great piece of work (:

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

I love the ending :O I like how it personifies Death... amazing

[DeathByChoice]

My favorite line was the last. "I welcome you"! Great way to end it!

[Tara Ghorm]

I really like this. I loved looking through it and wondering which side I was on. Do I fear it or love it? Does it consume me or just bother me occasionally?

Excellent write. Keep up the good work!

[Mercedes]

I like this. The way you wrote it is interesting, but it really makes the poem stand out. And I love your choice of font colors, and the fact that you used different colors. The last line is great. Good poem!