Reign of March

Rainy day writing and friends are feeling gloomy...

This March does not

spring to active bloom

as rains wash over

like tears heaven sent

So many feel hurt

left outside so cold

Alone with their motivations

Sorrows filling the cracks

Careless somber rains down

with no ease forseen

colour fades to shades

of grey clouded skies

Time spent beyond credit

breathing heavy and difficult

spending time in reprieve

all but lost again

Sulking easier than joy

giving in to tempest

comfort of sadness embraced

with content upon face

This weather drearily drains

of passions held close

yet few give credence

to your missing talent

I know not of

all these woes buried

bringing your spirit down

etching marks on soul

March to another tune

dance without your cares

speak with true heart

whisper your desires softly

So don't the rains

reign over you thick

when soul so strong

smiles with radiant light

Reviews

[Dark Heart of Winter]

In general this captures very well how ones soul can reflect a gloomy, rainy spring day when the ice cold rain seeps into everything ,even the cracks of your soul. :)

this line caught my eye:

'
Sulking easier than joy
giving in to tempest
comfort of sadness embraced
with content upon face
'
So true... many of us do find a certian comfort in sadness, a joy in gentle sorrow...plus its just easier to be depressed lol.

'I know not of
all these woes buried
bringing your spirit down
etching marks on soul
'
Again this strikes a chord...depressed people cant explain whats wrong and non-depressed people cant understand. its very isolating. Also you get so frusturated at hopelessly gloomy and sad freinds.
this is awesome :) keep up the good work

[Wynter Ignatius]

This one is oddly not about me as I find rainy days refreshing and therapeutic, but many close to my heart seem to take those days like a ton of bricks, so to deal with the empathy I feel (what a wonderful yet wickedly sharp blade it is by the way) I wrote this. These days for me are often sunny days where the past washes over me - a personal storm only I really feel.

Thank you and I'm glad it moved you in some way.

[Sami Khalil]

Oh, my... You write profesionally in your blooming talent. You really bring spirits up...Bravo..................

[Wynter Ignatius]

Thank you again Sami - I have not been at this for more than a few years but I seem to elicit a response from those that take the time to read these pieces of me.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)..................

[A. Amos]

Very good piece this one. I thoroughly enjoyed your work and ideas within this poem.

[Wynter Ignatius]

Thank you - a lot of people around me are getting gloomy of late and this was what leaked out of my head.