Deliberate Discourse

Quiet mouse

Masked rat

Repeated prick

Prattle on

Cawing crow

Shiny treasure

Taking all

Prattle on

Timid fish

Beached alone

Not suicidal

Prattle on

Coiled serpent

Raging peace

Hypocrisy thick

Prattle on

Guarded crab

Exposing weakness

Inviting attack

Prattle on

Majestic eagle

Soaring lowly

Oblivious senses

Prattle on

Circling shark

Terrorizing peers

Elder's victim

Prattle on

Cunning fox

Silvered spattle

Biting tail

Prattle on

Questioning owl

Regurgitated lies

Wrong answers

Prattle on

Helpless turtle

Tucked tight

Home alone

Prattle on

Howling wolf

Absent moon

Alpha's omega

Prattle on

Scarred pride

Heroic cur

Parts unkown

Prattle on

Blank shadow

Thunderously creeping

Unheard despite

Prattle on

Empty mind

Cluttered completely

Thoughts derailed

Prattle on

Rogue thoughts

Chaotic design

Organized focus

Prattle on

Wounded soul

Lashing out

Reflecting wounds

Prattle on

Beating heart

Yearning blindly

Strangle hold

Prattle on

Reviews

[Dark Heart of Winter]

Very interesting form :) it all comes together in a series of interesting metaphors to conjure quite vividly how you feel about these people ---or is it one person you know well?

i particularly like the last bit:

Wounded soul
Lashing out
Reflecting wounds
Prattle on

Beating heart
Yearning blindly
Strangle hold
Prattle on

which seems to capture emotions we all feel but are hard to describe in a word or two.

[Wynter Ignatius]

I'm one that doesn't always challenge myself, but when I do this tends to be the result. This is more to people in general, some removed from my life, some distant, and others still unfortunately involved by proxy or circumstance. A lot of things were getting to me and I needed to express it in a fashionable way.

I see this has worked well in that regard.

[Honey-Bee]

different my friend and interesting! love this line: Howling wolf absent moon Alpha and Omega prattle on..

[Wynter Ignatius]

Yes - was unsure about this one till I read it myself a few times. I tend to find some random pattern or constriction and run with it.

[A. Amos]

Interesting and captivating read, truly enjoyed thanks for sharing

[Wynter Ignatius]

Thank you - I run with the sparks my mind sheds and see what it brings me.

[Alex Ryder]

Wow! This is incredible!! I quite like your refrain, and I love how you transfer from animals to human characteristics. Excellent job!

[Wynter Ignatius]

This was actually quite fun to write despite the subject matter. Thanks for your review and comments.