Circles

More random thoughts put to pen, pen to the page.

You ask me how I feel

So I told you exactly that

Round and round we go

Same track, same disgust

Thoughts and emotions shared

At your request, not mine

Time will pass as it often does

Little will change, yet again you start

Going around the same way as before

Change never easy for you

Asking the same questions again

Unable to take a divergent route

Circling around to the beginning

Like a twist in a mobius strip

Locking horns, taking the same trip

You feeling no remorse, me patient

For another go around the track

Differing routes I can not find

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Squash it already...
the title fits quite with the verse...
there are those who do not wish to end an argument or a dilemma...
for better or worst...take it and learn from it...move on...
but as you put this into words...the subject matter is a broken record...
may be try: Circling...instead...

[Kieta!]

Very nice; I never would have thought of some of the words you used in this poem, they're unique and very cool :) Great job! :)

[Wynter Ignatius]

Thank you Kieta - for a older and earlier piece I'm glad it moves people.