Love

A sweet Poem I wrote for my husband on Valentines Day this year

In a thought I hear you whisper my name...
In the midst of sorrow, I feel your love...
In the dead of night, when all is dark, you shed your light on me.
Words could never express my love for you...so here I try to show you.
I love thy smile like a rose loves the sun
I love thy eyes like a winter's day loves the warmth of spring.
I love thy mind like a desert loves the rain.
You lifted me high on wings of compassion, when things were weak, you gave me strength.
A soft whisper of sound, from your lips..like music to my soul, it lifts me .
In thought I hear you whisper my name, and it's like the horns of heaven playing for me.

In eternal bonds and eternal love..I dedicate this poem, to my soul and fallen Angel.

Reviews

[barricade]

a great tribute! just love these lines...

"Words could never express my love for you...so here I try to show you.
I love thy smile like a rose loves the sun
I love thy eyes like a winter's day loves the warmth of spring.
I love thy mind like a desert loves the rain."

a lovely poem for your beloved...

great work...keep it up! and thanks for sharing...


regards
barricade...

[Phenomena]

Wow great construction. But what intrigues me the most is the comparison with love and daily life kinda
"I love thy smile like a rose loves the sun"
Great similes. Keep it up:)
God Bless:)

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Wonderful and sweet.
Such strong promises! It speaks of a great and everlasting romance.

Good write.

Punishment