Delusion

When we know the truth but refuse to accept it

 

 

 

Standing in the road

Two paths before me

The signs clear

Like the changing of seasons

 

One bringing pain

The other is known

painful still

for various reasons

  

Words of beauty

Have the ring of truth

Fall to the wayside

When put to the test

 

They hold no substance

Without actions

The reality is

They are like all the rest

 

The clock is ticking

Time has told

Sadness dwells

Truth has been revealed

 

No comfort to be had

No friend at my side

There is nothing

No safety to shield

 

My foot to the path

Which way to go

The words have dried up

The beauty is dead

 

Sadness enfolds

For the path of old

Understanding has dawned

It was only in my head

Reviews

[Twilight]

Most of the meanings in this interesting poem, are quite self-evident. But that is not a weakness. In fact, it's a compliment to the writer's apt wording. She seems to have chosen every word with a purpose.

The use of four lines in every verse is not restrictive in any way. On the otherhand, a less able writer would probably not have managed to ensure that every line keeps the reader's attention within this structure.

Although thought-provoking, this is achieved in a gentle way throughout the poem.

Verse three reminds the reader that in reality, all words are superficial. In other words, their value is limited. On the otherhand, perhaps she is suggesting that the "beauty" of words can mask their inadequacy at times?

The following verse gives credence to the old saying, that "actions speak louder than words". Sometimes, even those of us who think deeply, can be distracted or rate mere words too highly.

"Wycked" makes the theme of this poem quite clear in her concise description.

Nice writing. Looking forward to more!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

it is a puzzle why we take roads; but you know,
most of the time is was a wise chosen one =) ---mishel

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very mysterious writing... the collision of reality and fantasy can blur our vision and future... I really enjoyed this.

[Elzereth]

A beautiful poem, full of emotion. I like the way the rhyming words are only at the end of each verse. I don't see too many poems written that way. You did a wonderful job, keep up the good work!

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

"No comfort to be had
No friend at my side
There is nothing
No safety to shield"

This is the worst when you feel alone and with no one to turn too.

Great write!

[Frank Terino]

I'm drawn to flow of this writing as well as the insightful way the ideas come together to create a vivid
impression defining awareness, your words reflect knowledge gained through experiences, Nice work!

[Jessica]

Really good. Makes me think a little. I liked it. =]