Vulnerable

The feeling of being defenseless and vulnerable

The sadness and sorrow spread like tendrils of ice ….

Permeating my consciousness

Leaving me wounded and shaken to the core

 

My head and my heart are warring against each other

Each wanting their own way

Each having opposite conclusions

 

The voice of reason cannot be heard

Chaos and despair each drowning out the truth

Leaving me blind and defenseless, vulnerable

Reviews

[Jessica]

I know how you feel in this. I've went through the same emotions recently. Great write and love the imagery!

[Elzereth]

This is a wonderful poem. Very powerful and descriptive words. Great job hon!

Your friend,
Michelle

[Frank Terino]

this poem is powerful and convincing, I could really feel the conviction behind the wording.
the form has a way of carrying your words, and the sets the idea in motion nicely, keep up the great work

[Rebecca Rogers]

>The sadness and sorrow spread like tendrils of ice �.
I love this line! I almost got a cold chill when I read this :)


I like how you give the feeling of the war between the head and heart. Nice job! :)

[Sean M. Addams]

wow ...... very powerful piece.... the imagery and flow were great in this.... overall nice job on this one!!!