Love

Simplest Form

I breath deeply in your essence

My heart swells with emotion

It fills me to the brim, with you

 

An ember is ignited as I burn

My breasts swell and my n*****s tighten

I exhale.. all my thoughts centered, on you

 

 

I close my eyes and feel your gentle touch down my spine

Curving around my hip, to rest their as I receive your kiss

Tasting the nectar, that is you

 

My heart speeds up with anticipation

I open my eyes, and gaze into yours

I whisper, I love… you

Reviews

[Frank Terino]

Absolutely beautifully written and romantic in essence, the passion flows through every word.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. it's heartfully embracing and sensual. Keep up the great work.

[Pax Analog]

Primal, simple, like the first man and woman.

"I love. . .you" arrives like the sun dawning in Eden.

Your poem carries Love full, near o'erflowing.

These lovers are ready for the wilderness of time. . .Beautiful.

[Wildecat]

Now this is a love poem, very nicely done.

[JRB]

love is so sweet when found, nice work,
Jan/uisiom