My body

The mind and body our very fragile

My heart has had it's last beat its last heartbreak .
My voice has had it's last worlds its last cry it's last arguments
My lungs have had there last breath
My brain has its last thoughts its last confusion
My eyes had its last tear

But because of you.. You can salvage what's left you you Save me
the passion of what's left of what keep me alive

You can make me realize what the purpose of finding put what's next what's left
Because of you I could move on
my heart could have more beats and less heartbreaks
my voice could be soothed and fixed with love I could speak again
I could breath again
my brain could be confused but it couldn't be confused with you
My eyes can see what's right here in front of me and that's you
You saved my body from vanishing

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems and spelling problems but just what did you think?

Reviews

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This is a Deep Write, Steaming from the very core of the soul. wonderful job