Liebe

"Liebe" is German for "love".

Light swallows me
Multi-colored tentacles wrap around my body
Dragging me deep into a blinding state
Confused and disoriented I try to negotiate
But the light will not talk back to me
Every movement of my body is countered by this terrible entity
It is ferocious and insatiable
It desires my soul
Nothing more
And most certainly nothing less

Reviews

[Aiden- Aiko- Kiyomi]

I like the darkness in your description of love. From what I have seen of love this poem holds very true in its explanation. Good work.

[playful>Julie xD]

good poem just not what im looking for, thanks for ur entry.

[4ammonologues]

I think this is a very interesting piece. You portrayed love in a very different light than most writers, or just people in general, do. I think it's very unique. It's dark and intense but your imagery is beautiful and vivid and your word choice is excellent.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

This is amazing, i love the way it flows and how well you have chosen your words.


amazing :-D

[Fallen Angel]

This is good, rather confusing, but good.