Dichotomy

I guess I thought I was taking too much Dramamine when I wrote this.

I wake up in a room full of wisps of whispers
They ramble on into the walls and bounce away
Fading into the stagnant air from whence they came

I look up into a sky full of dying clouds
They meander into a tornado and spin away
Taken by a nightmare rampaging in my dream

It feels so f*****g good
It feels so f*****g good
F*****g great
But it's so...

So dry
So much light
Such little gravity
Such a twisted reality
A distraught mind in a temporal catastrophe
Mother, will you please hide the Dramamine?

Reviews

[ilurvekinilaw]

Ahaha. Tha dark places drugs take you. Again, it's simple and with a crisp ending line too.

[Cassandra]

I really liked this one. First the dramamine bit made me giggle. But I have taken too much Benadryl and that s**t will **** you crazy too.
I really love all your descriptions..
and these lines

So dry
So much light
Such little gravity
Such a twisted reality
A distraught mind in a temporal catastrophe ---- fan tastic.