NIght Presents {chapter 5 of 8}

Number 5 in the Night series Poetry inspired by the artwork of Drew Darcy

Night Presents

 

Soft music played

And the lights were low

As slowly he made his way

 

Onto the bed

Of elegance in red

Her secrets on display

 

But as he pulled off

His red necktie

She quickly wrapped it round

 

And with a bow

In the middle you know

A pleasant present he found.

Reviews

[Brandy]

Soft music playing creates a beautiful mood, indeed.

I'm smiling and blushing while reading this. : )
She's very playful and poetic. Wrapping his red tie around her presents, just waiting for him to untie the bow.

His excitement will overflow.

[Trace]

Do you just love where this is going?
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments.
It gets better.

Trace