Night In {Chapter 2 of 8}

Number 2 in the night series Poetry inspired by the artwork of Drew Darcy

Night In

 

She heard the knock upon the door

Her heart was nervously beating

Once more she checked her look in the mirror

Anxieties high for their meeting

 

She slipped her heels upon her feet

The red pumps that matched her gloves

She slicked her lips, and fluffed her hair

For she hopes that’s what he loves

 

Then slowly opening the door to see

A beautiful big bouquet

His eyes bugged out and the flowers hit the floor

Along with the tickets to the ballet

 

He’d been anticipating this night with her

Oh, he had waited for so long

But if going out was all he had in mind

He promptly discovered he was dead wrong.

Reviews

[Brandy]

Yes, ' he'd been anticipating this night with her, ' but wasn't expecting to be breathless.

It sounds like plans are about to change.
Will they go out, or stay in ? I'll find out soon, I suppose. :)

You create such a beautiful mood with your words.

[Trace]

The night may be full of surprises, you will need to keep reading to find out, thanks for posting your wonderful comments and compliments.

Trace