Oh, my...what a tender yet seductive write. The first two stanzas are the author in a more vulnerable state, However, the third stanza, the author becomes the bold one so admired by me and many others! I love this evolution and can almost imagine the scenario, Mr Trace. Only a "real" man will admit his vulnerabilities...
"And day by day
I’ll give to you
All that sweet dreams are made of" (My knees just turn to water ...lucky woman, your woman :-)
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6 Days Ago
You honor me with such beautiful comments and compliments.
Thank you so very much.
<.. read moreYou honor me with such beautiful comments and compliments.
Thank you so very much.
Oh, my...what a tender yet seductive write. The first two stanzas are the author in a more vulnerable state, However, the third stanza, the author becomes the bold one so admired by me and many others! I love this evolution and can almost imagine the scenario, Mr Trace. Only a "real" man will admit his vulnerabilities...
"And day by day
I’ll give to you
All that sweet dreams are made of" (My knees just turn to water ...lucky woman, your woman :-)
Posted 6 Days Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
6 Days Ago
You honor me with such beautiful comments and compliments.
Thank you so very much.
<.. read moreYou honor me with such beautiful comments and compliments.
Thank you so very much.
Thanks Jim it's an oldie, but a goody.
I appreciate your wonderful comments and complimen.. read moreThanks Jim it's an oldie, but a goody.
I appreciate your wonderful comments and compliments on my poem.