Let's Wake My Love

Enjoy each day with the one you love

Let’s wake my love, before the sunrise,
Let not the moon’s soft glow be lost,
Whisper not in my ear as your lips linger
There in the warmth of this embrace,

 
Let’s wake my love, before the wild bird’s,
Let not the shadows hinder or fade,
For there in the glow of your innocence 
l falter at the purity of your angelic face

Let's wake my love, from passion's slumber, 
Let not the tangled sheets incumber  yet
Before your smile weekens my resolve 
And l fall again with no remorse

Let’s wake my love, My sweetness 
Let’s not another moment waste
For there is much to do,  to see
The path lies clear, must stay the course. 

Let's wake my love, my life, my soul
Let's breathe in the morning, the new day
Come with me as our journey unfolds 
Our two hearts join in the chase.

Reviews

[G]

Hello T., I notice you repeat that word, love, often.
I feel like it's an overused filler word.
Love, to me, means complete and total loyalty, dedication, commitment.
Everytime it's used someone should have to put a dollar in a jar.
Then it would mean something.
I like the sensuality of the piece. Last stanza, second line: Breath should be Breathe.

[Trace]

Thank you for your reading my work, and catching my missing "E". First person to my blunder.
read moreThank you for your reading my work, and catching my missing "E". First person to my blunder.
I am glad you enjoyed my writing.

Huggs, T.

[G]

No biggie, love, it just reads better. I knew what it meant. Yeah, spelling is not really important in poetry. I was being a b***h. Sorry, You are awesome.

[Trace]

Sometimes, spellchecker doesn't work in our favor. But l did fix it. Thanks.

[TL Boehm]

a lovely gentle and romantic write. So good to read you again.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments. It has been awhile, but every now and then my muse makes a pass through my universe and drops in to visit. Your visit is also very important to me and appreciated.

Huggs, T

[MsJewel]

I have missed your poetry so very much. This is lovely Trace. You can write anything, but your romantic poetry I believe is your best poetry. Your words are silk on the page. Lovely my friend. :) Julie

[Trace]

Well Hello my dearest friend. I was afraid you got married, retired, and moved to Bora Bora. It fills my heart with such joy to hear from you. I have missed you so.

This was the poem l started a long time ago, hoping to get your softer input on, but l woke up one morning and the words just spilled forth from my pen. I am so glad you liked it.
I look forward to collaborating on somethi g soon. Do you feel the change in the season getting your creative juices flowing? We need to have a meeting of the vines.

Luv ya always... T.

[MsJewel]

Sounds good to me handsome. Hugs, Julie

[Sami Khalil]

A most charming poem of ultra- romance mixed with eternal love. Let us not (waste) those moments indeed. A smooth pen was upon this.

[Trace]

Dange spell check. I was writing on my phone. Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments on my poem. It's been a while since I have written.

Trace.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir.