Master of Desire

From my "Desires Series" can you see all of the different patterns?

Master of Desire

 

Master, oh master, you know what I crave

All I possess, I leave go of

So easy to please, oh make me your slave

Take me; oh take me to your chambers of love

Even as though it is oft what I need

Release me my freedom and make me behave

 

Of this I do wonder, how could it be so

For all this I ponder, now that I’ve let go,

 

Desire is strong, my soul is on fire

Even as I know, the power of your touch

So come unto me, your strength I admire

Induce your will, it’s never too much

Remove my innocence, replace with thy greed

Exposed vulnerability for my Master of Desire.  

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nicely penned. You really show the power desire has on people. It's hard to control, but good to many of times. Tyfs

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on my poem.

[Kerra]

Wow, always love this form of write. This is awesome.

[Trace]

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments on my poetry. This is one of my favorites. Glad you liked it.

Trace

[Azifwecare]

holy cow, that was one hell of a smoldering hot, passionate plea for your mistress. Loved it!!

[Trace]

This was a challenge to create an acrostic and incorporate the title of the poem in the first word of each verse and at the end of the poem.
Im so glad you liked it.
One of my better poems.

[Azifwecare]

well you make it seem so easy to do. Like a serenade knowing just what to say.