There is something magical
In a winter night's storm
Not a blizzard,. Oh no.
But a calm, steady gathering of giant delicate flakes,
It brings out the desire
To build a glowing fire
And snuggle up with somebody warm,
And let it snow.
Have you ever stood outside as it snowed,
When all was calm, still and slow
And listened
to shimmering crystals falling,,,
Softly, quietly, kissing, calling,,
Listen closely,.
It's like angels whispering...
Let it snow.. let it snow.. let it snow.
Where I'm from snow is a very rare treat indeed to see. Your poem is like a warm blanket wrapping around your reader, while imagining the snow falling.Lovely poem
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
I'm at work today and we are at a complete standstill because of the snow storm.
(Which means.. read moreI'm at work today and we are at a complete standstill because of the snow storm.
(Which means I can catch up on messages). Thank you my new friend for reading my poetry. I hope you find lots that you like.
"Have you ever stood outside as it snowed,
When all was calm, still and slow
And listened
to shimmering crystals falling,,,
Softly, quietly, kissing, calling,,
Listen closely,."
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
This had a complicated rhyme pattern, but it's in there.
Let it snow... Living in California, I don't get to experience the snow very often, but your words had me right there "listening to angels whispering'. You have such a gentle heart Tracey. It shows in every beautifully penned line. Hugs, Julie
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you my dear friend. Your poem really inspired me to write this. (Or maybe it was my comments t.. read moreThank you my dear friend. Your poem really inspired me to write this. (Or maybe it was my comments to your poem) but I so appreciate your kind words and comments.
Huggs,. Trace
I have not been in a real snow storm since the early 1980s, but this not only made me want to, but made me "see" the snow. Very nicely written with great imagery. ~Jim
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and compliments.
Trace