Breathe

a Little love Scribble

                                

All rational thought escaped me

 

        My mind spun  wildly

                Eyes misted over

                        Knees got weak

                                My heart skipped a beat

 

                Maybe two…….

 

And between the rush of emotions

        The flustered feelings clouding my senses,

                And Passion building to a fevered pitch……

 

        At that very moment

                You first kissed me

 

                        It was all I could do;

 

                                To Breathe

Author's Note

Painting: "Insieme" by Escha

Reviews

[Robert]

Trace, what a very descriptive piece you have written about that "first kiss". We all remember that time in our lives or even that first kiss with another we fall in love with. Such a magical time.

[Trace]

The anticipation can be almost as exciting as when lips meet.
And an unexpected kiss from someone special can spark feelings and emotions beyond compare.

I am so glad you enjoyed my take of that first kiss.

Trace

[MsJewel]

There is nothing like the excitement of a first kiss. Beautifully expressed in your own unique style Trace. Love it!

Julie

[Trace]

Sometimes a first kiss has to be one remembered from years past....
Others are merely imagination .

I am so glad you liked this one.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, that first kiss....nothing else quite like it, is there? Wonderful! Lydi**

[Trace]

Do we remember all those first kisses?
There are some I have forgotten on purpose,
others I will remember forever.

Thank you again for your great comments.

Trace

[Eugene Finley]

To be together - as one, "insieme". The first kiss; a kiss that people try to mimick over and over again. If you don't, you should. Love it.

[Trace]

your wonderful comments and compliments are so appreciated,

Trace

[JayceeC]

Trace...what a great description of the excitement and anticipation of a first kids ss or even a next first kiss.. what a great "scibble"...lol

[Trace]

It should be this way every time you kiss someone you love.
But the first kiss that you have anticipated can be a make or break proposition
to a continuing relationship.

May every kiss take your breath away.
Thank you for your excellent comments and compliments.

Trace

[Kelly Scheppers]

...gorgeous! I love how you kept it simple...and THAT ending, was sublime!

[Trace]

Thank you my dear friend for your wonderful compliments,
your opinions and comments mean the world to me.

Huggs, Trace

[Matching Socks]

Wonderful, beautiful, romantic poetry Trace.

[Trace]

Thank you sweet friend
I so appreciate your compliments.

Trace

[Matching Socks]

My pleasure! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

better fix the WEEK knees n make em Weak........Good flow though

[Trace]

Thanks doc for the read and great comments... (including the weak spell check on my part)
read moreThanks doc for the read and great comments... (including the weak spell check on my part)

Your compliments are greatly appreciated.

Trace