Under a Waxing Moon

Under a Waxing Moon

A Poem by Trace
"

Falling in love

"


Deep within our memories


Of starlit evenings past


We walked among the willows


Dreaming of love that would last,


 


Wispy breezes of evening dew


Pulled at our heartstrings so


I took your hand in my hand


And let the streams of romance flow,


 


The sound of nature was our song


We listened to the crickets play


Stars above, our chandeliers


So we danced the night away,


 


We held each other ‘neath velvet skies


Kissed as our bodies swayed


Right then and there we fell in love


As the orchestra gently played,


 


Wonderful were those natural desires


This new journey we were on


Bright moon shadows and shooting stars


Lit our path from dusk till dawn,


 


Love has been a splendid thing


Indebted for this gift from above


Just you and me, dancing happily


~Together, forever in love. ~


© 2015 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
Photograph by Jeff McGrath

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This site is getting over-loaded with romance,eh?? :p.. but no matter my personal opinion of romance i really liked it.You have a thing for moon,flowers,rays, all these lovely things which symbolize a happily ever after. This poem covered me in a slow blanket of divine love.Leaving me craving for more :) excellent job done here. *keep writing*

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

What a wonderful and heartwarming comment and your compliments mean the world to me.
Thank yo.. read more
Sophy Freebirds

9 Years Ago

aww.. :) it was a pleasure reading you. *hugss back at yaa*



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I'm with Julie---I love the chandeliers! I also loved walking among the willows, and the velvet sky. Rich and plush...delicious piece! Oh, and the wispy breezes of evening dew...ahhhhh.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

It takes a romantic heart to appreciate the wonders of nature.

Thank you so very much.. read more
This site is getting over-loaded with romance,eh?? :p.. but no matter my personal opinion of romance i really liked it.You have a thing for moon,flowers,rays, all these lovely things which symbolize a happily ever after. This poem covered me in a slow blanket of divine love.Leaving me craving for more :) excellent job done here. *keep writing*

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

What a wonderful and heartwarming comment and your compliments mean the world to me.
Thank yo.. read more
Sophy Freebirds

9 Years Ago

aww.. :) it was a pleasure reading you. *hugss back at yaa*
Ugh this made me melt. I am such a sucker for romance ! I loved this ! Job well done !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. .. you have made my day.
Hope you get a chance to read more of my l.. read more
Sarah Lynn

9 Years Ago

No problem you are VERY welcome (: & I will be sure to do so !
Absolutely beautiful "chandeliers in the sky" (sigh) breathtaking.
You have such a romantic heart sweet beast.

Hugs, J
Hey...check the 3rd line in the 2nd verse - you missed an r.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your excellent comments and wonderful eyes.
R going to fix it now.
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Heavy sigh....the words are melodic and dance on the page. You bring in celestial imagery and such vivid romantic scenes. Absolutely divine! Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Laughing here....I hope you mean "sweet" ...I mean just because I live in the tropics, does not mean.. read more
Trace

9 Years Ago

LMAO. that's right
Women glisten.......
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Really LOL here....you crack me up, Trace!

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Added on February 21, 2015
Last Updated on February 22, 2015
Tags: Moon, love, romance, dancing, starlight

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Trace

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