The "Snowman" poem

The "Snowman" poem

A Poem by Trace
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The first poem I memorized and recited.

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When I was but a child, maybe five or so

At Christmas time, mom taught me a poem

The first one I learned to recite by myself

And on Christmas Eve I stood all alone


 

My knees were shaking as I tried to talk

But I wanted so much to tell

The poem that I had practiced for hours

And I had it memorized so well,


 

So I mustered up the courage

I stood up tall and straight

I saw my snowman outside the window

And the words would no longer wait:


 


 

“Once there was a snowman

Stood outside the door

Thought he would like to come inside

And play about the floor


 

Thought he would like to warm himself

By the fire bright

Thought that he could snuggle up

In the big feather bed at night


 

So he called the North Wind

Help me now I pray

I’m completely frozen

Standing here all day


 

So the North wind came along

And blew him inside the door

And now there is nothing left of him

But a puddle on the floor”


 


 

Everybody laughed and clapped their hands

Mommy smiled and kissed my head

Then we all got to open just one present

Before we each got tucked in to bed


 

As usual, I was the first up on Christmas morning

And it was always way before dawn

That North Wind must have blown all night

Because when I looked outside,  my snowman was gone.


© 2014 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
This is the very first poem I learned and recited.


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We never forget our first, do we? :) A charming story, this brought a smile Trace!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

I am embarrassed that I am finding these comments from a long time ago.
Please forgive me the.. read more
Oh Trace, what an amazing poem, I am sure this was beautifully read by you as it is so well written - as all your poems are!

Truly loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Trace

9 Years Ago

I am at work right Now up in the mountains of Utah
And it is snowing so heavy they have the s.. read more
What a precious memory...I'm sure you were adorable. Thank you for sharing this wonderful memory and adorable poem.

Hugs, Julie

100/100 tiny snowflakes

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

It has been pretty dry this autumn and winter
But a giant snow storm is rolling in tonight.read more
Trace

9 Years Ago

We will have a white Christmas.

Giant snowman HUGGS.
Trace
I think you have posted this before....not only do I think the poem you memorized is adorable, but the poem you wrote to cradle it in your memory is wonderful. Great rhyming and rhythm. Merry Christmas to you and the family,Trace. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my dear friend. It is so good to see you.
Hope you have a joyous Hanuk.. read more
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Trace. Lydi**
A poem within a poem; this is fairly unique, I'd say. Clever too, and very cute. It works.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

My mother told me that my grandmother had written the snowman poem when she was young and sent it to.. read more
I am not sure what the first poem I would have learned and recited, most likely a nursery rhyme, this was a lovely memory of days gone by, well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

I am so glad you enjoyed this little scribble.

May your snowman never melt.

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Trace

9 Years Ago

Read more was just this

Trace
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful childhood memory, Trace ... You've painted the whole scenario so beautifully. Heartwarming poetry ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Trace

9 Years Ago

I think you have to go to the top of the mountain on the big island if you want to make a snowmanread more
Trace

9 Years Ago

Oops. Comment got cut.
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this l.. read more
Tiana

9 Years Ago

Yes there is on the Big Island but I'm on Oahu and I've never been to the Big Island during the Wint.. read more
I remember this. It is very special. Thank you for sharing it again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you again.
I was hoping my son would want to read it and recite it at Christmas
Bu.. read more
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Absolutely charming.. it brought back memories for me

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful compliments and comments.

Merry Christmas.

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Stella Armour

9 Years Ago

A Merry Christmas to you Trace.. ♫
It brings back all the fun and good memory to you,sir...Bravo.............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments on this poem.

Happy holidays.
<.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Happy Holidays. You are welcome...:).....

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Added on December 21, 2014
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