Trace, you write such beautiful poems; this is no different at all - You have a heart of cold and your wishes, I know for a fact, will come true, all anyone has to do is read you and your poetry and it will make their night - as it has mine, so thank you, for writing such wonderful poetry and being an amazing friend.
Have a lovely holidays season, my friend. Merry Christmas!
Absolutely beautiful - I can hear the bells ringing.
Merry Christmas
:) Julie
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I remember hearing the bells from the church by my house when I was a child
We got in the car .. read moreI remember hearing the bells from the church by my house when I was a child
We got in the car and drove down to see them and found the sound was coming from giant loud speakers. There just is no comparison to the real thing.
Thank you for your wonderful comments on my Christmas poem.
There is something special about Christmas Eve, the calm and quiet, well captured in this poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
You found exactly what I was hoping this poem expressed.
Thank you my friend for your wonderfu.. read moreYou found exactly what I was hoping this poem expressed.
Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments.
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this poem
You have made my day. read moreThank you so very much for reading and commenting on this poem
You have made my day.
NOTES: I recommend you increase the font size to at least 14pt. Also, I recommend changing the font face to Georgia or Times because they have a softer appearance.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your excellent compliments and comments.
Have a very merry Christmas. read moreThank you for your excellent compliments and comments.
A lovely Christmas poem, well presented.
Ps I think you meant quiet, not quite.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this piece
And for your sharp eye.
.. read moreThank you so very much for reading and commenting on this piece
And for your sharp eye.