Another Star in Heaven

Another Star in Heaven

A Poem by Trace
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A poem for the departed

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Look at the gathering sky, as the crimson sun slowly falls,


And listen of whispering shadows, tis the evening calls,


 


As twilight pushes up the sun, each morning starts anew,


We count our every days delight, each storm or wind that blew,


 


Our lives are given to the Earth, yet of which they came,


Though our souls are a gift of Heaven, A star without a name,


 


We choose our paths and lift the cross, burdens we will bear,


And weave in to our tapestry, friend’s sorrows we might share.


 


Yet when our time on Earth is done, our pains and sorrows quell,


On Angel wings, our spirits glide, with a heavenly chorus swell,


 


Come nightfall, a new light shines for us, its brilliance we recognize,


For our dear departed loved ones, are the brightest stars in the skies.


 





© Copyright 2009




© 2014 Trace


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the majestic spiritual quality of this one is serene, touching, and beautiful.. it flows like a gentle breeze, uplifting, and moving the soul.. from the picture, to the font, color, construction, and meaning, it is enchanting and deep.. It felt like waves of emotion washing over me guiding me to the sky.. This one touched me on such a level having lost someone very close recently and was comforting in its tenderness and sentiment.. I adore the depth and skill in which you write Trace.. you have such a beautifully romantic spirit that I appreciate and respect.. I am honored to call you friend, and absolutely adore your writing.. stunning job with this one.. it is definitely one of your best, in my opinion..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

I am humbled by your incredibly meaningful and touching compliments on this poem.

Afte.. read more
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

you're more than welcome.. it is always a pleasure..



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This is also dreamy. Like I could stand in the star filled night sky and see everything take place before me. Nice poem , my new friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

I wrote this for a friend at yhe passing of his father. He actually read it at the funeral.
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Audrey M.

3 Years Ago

That was very kind of you
Heart warming! Makes me feel close to my loved ones that has gone on! Thank you!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

I am so glad you enjoyed this poem and that it might bring comfort to you.
Thank you for your .. read more
KAREN

9 Years Ago

My pleasure!
I love the sentiment in the last few lines of this piece. Stars in the sky.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

It is a comfortable to me knowing I will see my loved ones again.
And knowing they are there e.. read more
Wow. Your poem is incredible! It is intensely songlike which goes hand in hand with its spiritual tones. Beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your incredibly kind compliments.

Can you imagine a choir s.. read more
The spirituality of this gives a sense of serenity. Your lyrical meter and rhyme only add a majestic beauty to this transcendent work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Your beautiful compliments humble me.
Thank you so very much.

Trace
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
This is beautiful, Trace - a prayer, a hope, a faith, expressed in this lovely lyric piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rita for your lovely compliments on this poem.
I am so glad you liked it.
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The special charm in your writing surrounded by grace and refulgence fascinates me.
It's always such a pleasure to enter the warm dimensions of your thoughts. Kudos! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

I am honored with such a wonderful compliment.
Thank you so very much.

Trace
You have a beautiful heart my friend (which is one of the reasons I adore you)...and it shines in every gorgeous line of this stunning poem. With that said, I love the classic feel to your words...truly this is you at your best. This is a poem I'll read again and again...you big old softy you....

Hugs, Julie


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

It is never easy losing a loved one, but knowing that their spirit resides among the brightest stars.. read more
Another beautiful poem and it is one that many of us can relate to. I too look up to the stars when I think about the ones I have loved and lost.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Isnt it interesting how we always think of the heavens as full of stars but we dont look at the sunn.. read more

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Added on November 11, 2014
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