Another Star in Heaven

A poem for the departed

Look at the gathering sky, as the crimson sun slowly falls,

And listen of whispering shadows, tis the evening calls,

 

As twilight pushes up the sun, each morning starts anew,

We count our every days delight, each storm or wind that blew,

 

Our lives are given to the Earth, yet of which they came,

Though our souls are a gift of Heaven, A star without a name,

 

We choose our paths and lift the cross, burdens we will bear,

And weave in to our tapestry, friend’s sorrows we might share.

 

Yet when our time on Earth is done, our pains and sorrows quell,

On Angel wings, our spirits glide, with a heavenly chorus swell,

 

Come nightfall, a new light shines for us, its brilliance we recognize,

For our dear departed loved ones, are the brightest stars in the skies.

 

© Copyright 2009

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

the majestic spiritual quality of this one is serene, touching, and beautiful.. it flows like a gentle breeze, uplifting, and moving the soul.. from the picture, to the font, color, construction, and meaning, it is enchanting and deep.. It felt like waves of emotion washing over me guiding me to the sky.. This one touched me on such a level having lost someone very close recently and was comforting in its tenderness and sentiment.. I adore the depth and skill in which you write Trace.. you have such a beautifully romantic spirit that I appreciate and respect.. I am honored to call you friend, and absolutely adore your writing.. stunning job with this one.. it is definitely one of your best, in my opinion..

[Trace]

I am humbled by your incredibly meaningful and touching compliments on this poem.

After losing my mother-in-law, I wrote this for their family.
At her passing, my father-in-law read one of my poems at her funeral.
I was very honoured.

Thank you my sweet friend.

Trace

[AprilRN1210]

you're more than welcome.. it is always a pleasure..

[Audrey M.]

This is also dreamy. Like I could stand in the star filled night sky and see everything take place before me. Nice poem , my new friend.

[Trace]

I wrote this for a friend at yhe passing of his father. He actually read it at the funeral.

I'm glad you liked this poem.
Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments.

Trace

[Audrey M.]

That was very kind of you

[KAREN]

Heart warming! Makes me feel close to my loved ones that has gone on! Thank you!!!!

[Trace]

I am so glad you enjoyed this poem and that it might bring comfort to you.
Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Trace

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the sentiment in the last few lines of this piece. Stars in the sky.

[Trace]

It is a comfortable to me knowing I will see my loved ones again.
And knowing they are there every night sparkling for me to keep them in my heart.

Thank you for your wonderful compliments.

Trace

[Isa Ruffatti]

Wow. Your poem is incredible! It is intensely songlike which goes hand in hand with its spiritual tones. Beautiful!

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your incredibly kind compliments.

Can you imagine a choir singing it??

With much appreciation
Trace

[MomzillaNC]

The spirituality of this gives a sense of serenity. Your lyrical meter and rhyme only add a majestic beauty to this transcendent work.

[Trace]

Your beautiful compliments humble me.
Thank you so very much.

Trace

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is beautiful, Trace - a prayer, a hope, a faith, expressed in this lovely lyric piece.

[Trace]

Thank you Rita for your lovely compliments on this poem.
I am so glad you liked it.
read moreThank you Rita for your lovely compliments on this poem.
I am so glad you liked it.

Trace

[Jeannette Lunete]

The special charm in your writing surrounded by grace and refulgence fascinates me.
It's always such a pleasure to enter the warm dimensions of your thoughts. Kudos! :)

[Trace]

I am honored with such a wonderful compliment.
Thank you so very much.

Trace

[MsJewel]

You have a beautiful heart my friend (which is one of the reasons I adore you)...and it shines in every gorgeous line of this stunning poem. With that said, I love the classic feel to your words...truly this is you at your best. This is a poem I'll read again and again...you big old softy you....

Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

It is never easy losing a loved one, but knowing that their spirit resides among the brightest stars is always a comfort.

I am so glad you found this poem inspirational and I really appreciate your wonderful compliments and comments.

HUGGS. . Trace

[Angela L Garratt]

Another beautiful poem and it is one that many of us can relate to. I too look up to the stars when I think about the ones I have loved and lost.

[Trace]

Isnt it interesting how we always think of the heavens as full of stars but we dont look at the sunny sky the same.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful comments on this poem.

Trace