A Pondering Moon

A little love poem for dreamers.

They met 

Where a pondering moon 

 Chased waves across the shoreline 

Two passionate souls that longed for this moment 

When eyes would gaze into the other's 

 Hands would touch for the very first time 

     And emotions would pour like a finely aged wine 

Words were not needed before lips met 

In an embrace they had waited so long for 

      So real........ 

           So overpowering as they clung to one another 

And they both knew 

As their bodies burned with a fire that had been ignited so long ago 

This night would not end 

                 With the setting of a pondering moon.

Author's Note

Inspired by MsJewels poem "Moving South"

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Lovely vignette of passion to come and romance. I love the setting and solitude of these lovers meeting at the ocean side. The beach is always so quiet at night with people far and few in between. It's so beautiful, that i've always pondered why more people do not take advantage of its intimacy. Lovely write Trace! jaycee

[Trace]

Thank you again my dear friend.
I am so glad you enjoy my work.

HUGGS. Trace

[J Otero]

Absolutely wonderful. So much emotion and visualization for a little love poem. Well done.

[Trace]

Thank you for your wonderful compliments on this poem
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

read moreThank you for your wonderful compliments on this poem
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Trace

[NoelHC]

This is powerful and moving, I related to this work so much. Well done Trace.

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for your wonderful compliments on this little scribble

Trace

[s y e]

I'm a dreamer for sure. I can feel the emotion and imagery through this one, Trace. Outstanding.

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for your incredibly complimentary comments on this piece.

Realities springs from our dreams.

Trace

[Matching Socks]

Stunning poetry Trace.
Truly felt the emotions come through in this.
Wonderful piece.

[Trace]

Thank you so much my dear friend for your lovely compliments.

Trace

[Cinnamengirl]

Wonderful. My favorite line is "and emotions would pour like a finely aged wine". Love that.

[Trace]

I am so glad you enjoyed this poem and that line.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and compliments on this piece.

Trace

[Hotwater]

Super poetry... Wonderful, a love poem of perfection.

*bird*

[Trace]

Thank you so very much. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my poem.

Trace

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A simple and direct piece that guides one to feel the wording, well done, good read.

[Trace]

Thank you Thomas for stopping in and leaving such a great comment.
So nice to see you.

Trace

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled my sensual little scribble inspired this beautiful poem Trace. It is stunning - soft, romantic...the perfect love poem.

:) Julie

[Trace]

Indeed it did...
And then some..... it was a southern California beach..
( Headed South... get it...LOL)

I need a great title for the second scene of their play.

Thank you sweet lady for your lovely inspiration and compliments on my writing.

XOXO. Trace

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow. Another sensually romantic and loving poem, beautifully written. An unrequited love becomes a reality, and something both have wanted for a long time comes to pass. Well done.

[Trace]

Thank you my friend.
Who says dreams cant come true....

Your comments are so appreciated.

Trace

[AprilRN1210]

this one has a nice little teaser build up, leaves you wanting more... wishing it would not end.. nicely done Trace..

[Trace]

Thank you my dear friend for your lovely compliments on this little quickie.

Funny you should mention it leave you wanting more....
There just happens to be more to the story.

Trace

[AprilRN1210]

you are more than welcome.. and more you say?