Soft pink lipstick and kisses on your neck...
yummy...
You shared so much feeling in so few words in this sensual little delicious treat. Your talent never ceases to amaze me...
and by the way..
I love it when you whisper quiet..
Hugs, Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.
PS. I lo.. read moreThank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.
And I go in for a bite if not a nuzzle. Sorry, a bit presumptuous on my part. But it's so sweet and romantic and deserving of a response as such.
Lovely poem, Trace. Becoming an addicted reader to your words 😁
A quietly sensual poem (no pun intended) that leaves a feeling of warmth and satisfies a that need for romance in the best sense of being up close and personal.
I wanted to find an older poem first and will review through several.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you my friend for reading and commenting on this poem.
Your compliments mean the world.. read moreThank you my friend for reading and commenting on this poem.
Your compliments mean the world to me.
Both sensual and romantic. This is short but says so much within just a few lines. Nicely done!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Sorry this is so late in coming.
But thank you so very much for reading and commenting. read moreSorry this is so late in coming.
But thank you so very much for reading and commenting.
MMMmmmmmm......now this is seductive, sensual, and oh so elegant, Trace. Leaves plenty to the imagination and yet leads the reader down the right path.....to the neck covered in soft pink tattoos! Fantastic work. Lydi**
A subtle ending, but perfect for this poem. Also, I think you mean plaintive (as in melancholy), rather than plaintiff (a defendant in court). We wouldn't want people to get confused. ;)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for your excellent comments and suggestions.
You are correct. It was written as p.. read moreThank you for your excellent comments and suggestions.
You are correct. It was written as plaintive but in posting from my phone, the autocorrect thought it knew better than I how to write poetry.
Very beautiful Trace. Soft, sensual, romantic moments like these should not be cherished.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for your compliments and comments on my poem.
Did you mean: "should be cherished? .. read moreThank you for your compliments and comments on my poem.
Did you mean: "should be cherished? Hoping......
Trace
10 Years Ago
Haha... I believe that's what I meant. Wtf?
How'd that 'not' get in there?
Oooh, this one gets me. For me, it's about a woman with whom there is an intense attraction, the speaker is not sure he should, but he does anyway ... one of my favourites of yours, for sure.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I think you know me too well.
My goodness. .. thank you for your excellent comments and compl.. read moreI think you know me too well.
My goodness. .. thank you for your excellent comments and compliments.
Soft pink lipstick and kisses on your neck...
yummy...
You shared so much feeling in so few words in this sensual little delicious treat. Your talent never ceases to amaze me...
and by the way..
I love it when you whisper quiet..
Hugs, Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.
PS. I lo.. read moreThank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.