Whisper Quiet

Whisper Quiet

A Poem by Trace
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An intimate love poem

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Whisper Quiet upon my neck 
As your favorite shade 
leaves Soft pink tattoos on my skin 

 And plaintive needs find refuge in my ear 

Subtle innuendo in your sparkling eyes 
With a murmured invitation 
Passions conspire, bodies entwine
 As you draw me in........ 

 And Whisper Quiet upon my neck.

© 2014 Trace


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Soft pink lipstick and kisses on your neck...
yummy...

You shared so much feeling in so few words in this sensual little delicious treat. Your talent never ceases to amaze me...
and by the way..
I love it when you whisper quiet..

Hugs, Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.

PS. I lo.. read more



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And I go in for a bite if not a nuzzle. Sorry, a bit presumptuous on my part. But it's so sweet and romantic and deserving of a response as such.
Lovely poem, Trace. Becoming an addicted reader to your words 😁

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

Ah, but will you favor me with your favorite shade of pink?

I am so happy to have a .. read more
Audrey M.

3 Years Ago

I've enjoyed every word 🤗
Trace

3 Years Ago

❤👍🥰😍🤗😚 thank you dear friend
A quietly sensual poem (no pun intended) that leaves a feeling of warmth and satisfies a that need for romance in the best sense of being up close and personal.
I wanted to find an older poem first and will review through several.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and commenting on this poem.
Your compliments mean the world.. read more
Both sensual and romantic. This is short but says so much within just a few lines. Nicely done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Sorry this is so late in coming.
But thank you so very much for reading and commenting.
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MMMmmmmmm......now this is seductive, sensual, and oh so elegant, Trace. Leaves plenty to the imagination and yet leads the reader down the right path.....to the neck covered in soft pink tattoos! Fantastic work. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my dear friend for your lovely compliments.

I bet you have left.. read more
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

A lady never tells! LOL
Trace

10 Years Ago

But the lipstick never lies....

Some poems I just love to love. Here is one by Trace. Whew!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Trace

10 Years Ago

This is the kind of compliments and comments that truly make my day.

Thank you so very.. read more
A subtle ending, but perfect for this poem. Also, I think you mean plaintive (as in melancholy), rather than plaintiff (a defendant in court). We wouldn't want people to get confused. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your excellent comments and suggestions.
You are correct. It was written as p.. read more
Very beautiful Trace. Soft, sensual, romantic moments like these should not be cherished.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Must be... :-)
Trace

10 Years Ago

They haunt my cell phone keyboard all the timeline

D****t. See?
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Lol!! Same with my iPad... Has a mind of it's own.
deliciously enticing!! very subtle but, oh, the images it summons!!!
reminded me of the Beatles' "closer... let me whisper in your ears...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Tell me things I want to hear..........

Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment.. read more
Oooh, this one gets me. For me, it's about a woman with whom there is an intense attraction, the speaker is not sure he should, but he does anyway ... one of my favourites of yours, for sure.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

I think you know me too well.
My goodness. .. thank you for your excellent comments and compl.. read more
Soft pink lipstick and kisses on your neck...
yummy...

You shared so much feeling in so few words in this sensual little delicious treat. Your talent never ceases to amaze me...
and by the way..
I love it when you whisper quiet..

Hugs, Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.

PS. I lo.. read more

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Added on November 9, 2014
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Tags: Whispers, making love, intimacy.

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Trace

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