An Innocent Neck

An Innocent Neck

A Chapter by Trace
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A spooky Halloween story about Love........ and Vampires

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It had been a year she recalled as she sipped her glass of wine

Sitting alone in an unseemly bar, waiting for the night to be over.

 

She had long outgrown the masquerade of Halloween,  after dropping out of college.

Dressing-up, Partying, acting the fool, it was quite ridiculous,

What; with the Jell-o shots and bad costumes at the vulgar parties where everyone seems to be pretending they are someone else, hoping to hook up for the night.

 

It was one of those dammed parties where she found him f*****g that brunette dressed up like a nasty witch.


“What, we’re just having fun”,   he said as that s**t slid off of him while she stood in the doorway staring in disbelief with her blue eye closed and her brown eye burning a hole through the man she loved.


"What an asss" she recalled; he actually wanted her to finish what that witch had started.


 


The bartender slid the fresh glass of wine under her chin as she sat staring with amusement at the old history book behind the bar, recollecting that night,


The last night she would ever see the man she had first given herself to.

 

“It’s from the young lady” he said, nodding toward her as she looked into his inquiring eyes.


She raised the glass to her nose, looked to the one that had offered the drink and took a sip.

 

Another lonely woman sitting in the bar, possibly because of the same circumstances,

She looked at her again, raised the glass in a mock toast and lipped the words:  “Thank you”


She was swallowing the last of the dark sweet wine as the beautiful red headed woman sat down next to her with an inquiring look but not saying a word.

 

A beautiful young lady of maybe 23 years , She wore a modest black dress as though just coming from an office job, but being what looked like half American and the other Vietnamese,  she had an air of elegance and, well; money.


A feeling of warmth came over her as she looked into this woman’s eyes and she felt the flush on her cheeks as the woman took her hand in her own and caressed her palm with her fingernails.


“Why are you here” she asked  “Why are you alone on this Halloween night”


        “I hate Halloween, what a bunch of crap”


“Someone hurt you on Halloween, didn’t they”,

      

         “How do you know that?”


“I don't know what it is, maybe it’s where I'm standing, or the air I'm breathing,  but it’s different,  I can feel it radiating from your soul” 


She quickly pulled her hand back and turned to face this woman, about to let her know she didn’t appreciate being bothered, but as she looked into her eyes again, a feeling of euphoria overcame her and she just stared at her, for what seemed like an eternity.


“You may call me Sumi, Are you ready to go?”


          “Yes”

 

She unconsciously followed this mysterious woman, without question to a black limousine, and graciously slid in alongside her as  a very handsome driver held the door.

 

The car began moving, and the woman turned to her and kissed her on the lips.


Although she had never entertained being with a woman before, she didn’t resist.  It was incredibly sensual and felt very natural, yet she also knew her senses were being controlled in a way she was unfamiliar with, but she had no urge to fight them.

 

The kissing became more intense and her head was spinning with a wanton desire, something she had never felt before.  Her heart was pounding so hard she was sure it could be heard outside the car as this mysterious woman began undressing her. 


She had lost any sense of defense, even though she hadn’t felt the need for it from the moment the woman took her hand. 


What was happening, what had she gotten herself into?   At the moment she didn’t care, it all felt so wonderful, the warmth of this woman’s lips on her skin, her sensual touch as she removed her clothing until she was completely naked on the black leather seat.

 

The car continued through the night as she lay back in what seemed like a trance while the woman kissed and caressed every inch of her nude body, without asking anything in return, she was brought to the most intense orgasm she had ever experienced.


Then as this newfound lover arose from between her thighs and a hot tongue traced a wet line up between her breasts, she looked into her face and the woman smiled.


She felt the draw, the connection; it washed over her like nothing she could explain.  She needed to be a part of this woman, to be owned, to give her everything; whatever was required of her.


And as she realized this, she saw them;

Two long slender ivory white teeth that extended over her blood red lower lip.

 

"What the Hell,  Was this it?" 

Would she lose her life this night to a psycho wannabe woman vampire?


Or was it the real thing? 


Could it be?  Was this really happening or was she dreaming?


Would she live or die?  would she have the choice?


 What the hell indeed,   she had never felt as good as she was feeling at this very moment.

 

She leaned her head to one side and reached up to take the beautiful woman’s face in her hands and guided it toward an innocent neck..




© 2024 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
Be very careful on Halloween

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Oooh I love stories like this 😃 enjoyed reading this one. It reminded me of a book I'd read once called midnite blue. But the guy vamp that led the girl away into his limo did all kinds of stuff to her apart from draining her of blood and shoved her out of the car and left her for dead. Here, I wasn't expecting to be left on a cliffhanger, but still loved it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

I got some mixed reviews on this story but enjoyed writing it. Like i said sometimes my thoughts .. read more
Azifwecare

3 Years Ago

as yours do to me, my friend. As I said before you are a great storyteller



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Oooh I love stories like this 😃 enjoyed reading this one. It reminded me of a book I'd read once called midnite blue. But the guy vamp that led the girl away into his limo did all kinds of stuff to her apart from draining her of blood and shoved her out of the car and left her for dead. Here, I wasn't expecting to be left on a cliffhanger, but still loved it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

I got some mixed reviews on this story but enjoyed writing it. Like i said sometimes my thoughts .. read more
Azifwecare

3 Years Ago

as yours do to me, my friend. As I said before you are a great storyteller
I remember reading this one before....and not reviewing it because I thought it was a bit too sexual. But, I will tell you it is well written. The vampire theme is strong on Halloween. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

I changed it a little for a challenge.
Thanks for your great comments as always.

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A sexy little Halloween treat. I think it is perfect as it is - hot and steamy, but leaving a little bit to the imagination. I definitely think you should do a series. Great writing Trace.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

I am so happy you liked this little twist of a quickie of a Halloween trist.
I have a whole ca.. read more
Truth be told, I always found vampires fascinating...
I enjoyed reading this fun sexy write...nice to mix it up a bit! ;)
Well done!



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Be careful this time of year.
They possess a very attractive power over those that show the sl.. read more
The vampires are sharpening their fangs

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sensual write. Perfect for Halloween!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

So glad you liked it.
Stay tuned for more of my favorite halloween writes.
this was an interesting write.. while I found the beginning to be entertaining, fizzled out a little in the middle for me.. I love a steamy story, but this one did fall a little short in the heat department (for me).. I am not sure exactly why.. lack of detail and sensations maybe.. the way things "suddenly" happen without flowing seamlessly from one idea, scenario to the next maybe.. not exactly sure.. enjoyed it yes.. but you have knocked my socks off before, and think that is what I expect from you mister!..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Excellent review. This is what I am looking for in my writing.
I am so glad you liked it but.. read more
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

you're welcome my friend.. always a pleasure
Trace

10 Years Ago

I am posting all my best Halloween poems
Mmm, have to say, it's the first sex lesbian vampire story I ever read. Interesting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

The Mmm leads me to think you enjoyed the story????

Thank you for reading and commentin.. read more
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Well certainly a twist on the theme.
Trace

10 Years Ago

A whole new take on body piercing.
Think of the possibilities

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Added on October 23, 2014
Last Updated on October 6, 2024
Tags: Vampires, Halloween, Love, Lust


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