Oh Dark of Night

A poem at my returning. Hope you like it

Bring back the stars

Oh dark of night

That they may sparkle for my love,

      That they would glisten in her eyes

Bring back your twinkling light

Bring back the moon

Oh dark of night

That it may glow upon her hair,

     That it may light her face for me

Bring back your noble light

Bring back the sun

Oh dark of night

That it would warm her tender heart,

     That it may shine till even tide

Bring back your golden light.

Author's Note

Been away to long...

I need my poetry fix.

Reviews

[Walker Andreasen]

First off, it's nice to see another Utahn on here. I know my profile says I'm in Texas but I was raised in Tooele.
Second, This poem touches me deeply right now..it's what I needed. I'm away from home for work for 8 more months... and as I lay in bed I long for my love...
Ha I won't get into detail here but thank you for this literature. It's what I needed.

[Trace]

Welcome... Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
Your compliments and comments are so appreciated.

Spent 7 years working in Dallas and Fort worth.
Sorry to hear you are away from the one you love.

Trace

[TL Boehm]

such beauty in this. could be a song. It doesn't need music but it would lend itself well to it.

[Trace]

Thank you sweet lady for your wonderful compliments.

I am so glad you like it.

Trace

[Angad Waraich]

Ah!
Love and celestial bodies.
No one can go wrong there .
It has good imagery, but having read your other work i frankly believe that this piece can still be elevated , because i feel it looses the flow towards the end.
But all in all a piece well done.

Thank you for sharing.
Angad

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this piece.
I appreciate your opinion and honesty.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

OH MY....such a romantic ode to the celestial beings. Beautifully written, Trace...deserving of a heavy sigh. Lydi**

[Trace]

It means the world to me that you enjoyed this one.

One of my best I think.

read moreIt means the world to me that you enjoyed this one.

One of my best I think.

Thank you so very much.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

It truly is, my friend.

[s y e]

This is gorgeous, Trace. You have been away far too long, it should be illegal. :) I loved this, cannot wait to read more from you.

[Trace]

You honor me sweet friend with such comments and compliments.
Thank you so much. It means the world to me that you enjoyed this poem.

Trace

[KAREN]

Beautiful imagery! Each and every stanza is expressed with a deep yearning!

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your incredibly beautiful compliments on my poem.

Trace

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[AprilRN1210]

can feel the passion and longing in this piece for that light that fills your soul... it is moving and beautifully expressed.. well done Trace.. nice to "see" you my sweet friend..

[Trace]

Wanted to write this with an old fashion feel to it.
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

read moreWanted to write this with an old fashion feel to it.
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Nice to see you.

Trace

[Relic's Bare Trees]

You've shared some beautiful words. The picture fits perfectly.

[Trace]

Thank you for your excellent comments and compliments.
Trace

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Your welcome.

[NoelHC]

Good to see you back, I was just starting to explore your writing when you took a break. Keep them coming.

[Trace]

So glad to see you enjoying my writing, and thank you for your compliments on it.

Stay tuned..

Thanks. Trace