The Old Haunted House

The Old Haunted House

A Chapter by Trace
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There really are haunted houses. I know this from real life experiences

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I grew up near an old house, long abandoned and lost

We knew not the circumstances, the reasons or cost
As kids we made up the stories, and told
Of the horrors that took place there, in times of old
We would dare each other, who was the bravest
And scare ourselves with fears of the gravest

Then in our teens, we became a little bolder

 We forgot those childhood fears, heck we were older
So we would go in the old house as sure as we might
We weren’t scared of things that go bump in the night
Are you afraid of the dead? We would ask as we crept
listening to the creeks and moans of the house as it slept

Then one Halloween we planned to spend the night
(like brave kids will do,)
We were tough and strong, and nobody else knew
So we rolled out our sleeping bags on the old wooden floor
We covered the windows, and barred all the doors
All was just fine, till the storm clouds rolled in
And lightning and thunder crashed around us like sin

Then from somewhere we heard a loud scream through the rain
A banging of shutters and the rattling of chains
We looked at each other and swore with an oath
Nobody would get us, there’s no such thing as ghosts
But in a broken old mirror, we saw in a flash
Of lightning, the image of a spirit from the past
A woman crying, and moaning and coming toward us
We stood there staring, at the blood on her dress
She was whispering something, Oh, we were scared no doubt
Then a booming voice said

“THIS IS MY HOUSE, GET OUT”

We ran for the door in the dark of the night
The four of us thought we would die of pure fright
But the house had plans for the trespassers we
We fell through the floorboards as we tried to flee
In a pile of kids in the black and the gloom
Four brave tough young men thought they had met their doom

As the storm raged on we searched all around
And realized we had landed under the house on the ground
We crawled out from under like a bat-outa-hell
Nobody will believe this frightening story we would tell


But one thing I will remember, though it’s not what I wanted


I know to this day;  “That old house was haunted”.



© 2017 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
What is Halloween without a ghost story or two.

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Hi Trace! Reminds me of when we went
Spalunking under ground in West Virginia
through tunnels to a lake where Bats flew
around like Bats out of Hell... Young
people are Brave👿 and sometimes
scared too... Your poem is awesome
and so are you... truly,?Pat

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.
They mean the.. read more



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Great unforced rhyme throughout this one,Trace. Just the right amount of eerie and haunting for Halloween! You are really a good story teller. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

It's Halloween time. Had to post some spooky poems.

I am so happy you liked my haunted.. read more
The poem tells an engaging story, and the way you presented it makes me realize that I'll have to delve a little deeper and find out how you post pictures and what fonts are available. I'm new to the site and haven't been very creative yet. You obviously know your way around and are using it to good advantage.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and compliments on this piece.
Just keep plugging along a.. read more
I love ghost stories and haunted houses. The existence between life and death has always piqued my interest. Very well expressed. A chilling tale with a pinch of humor. well penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

I am so glad you enjoyed this spooky Halloween story

Stay tuned for the next ones to be.. read more
I enjoyed reading this it is a great poem that is so vivid

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
I am thrilled you found it enjoyable.

Trace
it reminded me some childhood memories, an interesting read :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
Have a wonderful Halloween.

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Well written, it took me back to those days exploring abandoned houses, and scaring the hell out of ourselves so much! But we never even thought of staying overnight in any of them. You guys were brave. Or crazy.
An enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Trace

10 Years Ago

Even spooky ghost stories cant scare me away from the poetry I love,
I am so glad you enjoyed .. read more
Nicely done. I enjoyed this, and a great format too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Trace

10 Years Ago

I am thrilled that you enjoyed this spooky Halloween story poem.

It makes me shiver ev.. read more
Excellent, brilliantly gripping throughout. Creates superb spooky imagery and the ghost story is well penned. Loved it :) xx

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Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
I enjoyed trying to present the facts in a spooky way with out it sou.. read more
A fabulous piece that reads perfectly, made me shiver!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Trace

10 Years Ago

I wish I would have portrayed the actual fear a little more graphically
But I wanted to keep i.. read more

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