The Old Haunted House

The Old Haunted House

A Chapter by Trace
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There really are haunted houses. I know this from real life experiences

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I grew up near an old house, long abandoned and lost

We knew not the circumstances, the reasons or cost
As kids we made up the stories, and told
Of the horrors that took place there, in times of old
We would dare each other, who was the bravest
And scare ourselves with fears of the gravest

Then in our teens, we became a little bolder

 We forgot those childhood fears, heck we were older
So we would go in the old house as sure as we might
We weren’t scared of things that go bump in the night
Are you afraid of the dead? We would ask as we crept
listening to the creeks and moans of the house as it slept

Then one Halloween we planned to spend the night
(like brave kids will do,)
We were tough and strong, and nobody else knew
So we rolled out our sleeping bags on the old wooden floor
We covered the windows, and barred all the doors
All was just fine, till the storm clouds rolled in
And lightning and thunder crashed around us like sin

Then from somewhere we heard a loud scream through the rain
A banging of shutters and the rattling of chains
We looked at each other and swore with an oath
Nobody would get us, there’s no such thing as ghosts
But in a broken old mirror, we saw in a flash
Of lightning, the image of a spirit from the past
A woman crying, and moaning and coming toward us
We stood there staring, at the blood on her dress
She was whispering something, Oh, we were scared no doubt
Then a booming voice said

“THIS IS MY HOUSE, GET OUT”

We ran for the door in the dark of the night
The four of us thought we would die of pure fright
But the house had plans for the trespassers we
We fell through the floorboards as we tried to flee
In a pile of kids in the black and the gloom
Four brave tough young men thought they had met their doom

As the storm raged on we searched all around
And realized we had landed under the house on the ground
We crawled out from under like a bat-outa-hell
Nobody will believe this frightening story we would tell


But one thing I will remember, though it’s not what I wanted


I know to this day;  “That old house was haunted”.



© 2017 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
What is Halloween without a ghost story or two.

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Hi Trace! Reminds me of when we went
Spalunking under ground in West Virginia
through tunnels to a lake where Bats flew
around like Bats out of Hell... Young
people are Brave👿 and sometimes
scared too... Your poem is awesome
and so are you... truly,?Pat

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.
They mean the.. read more



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Oooh this was a cool ghost story and I dig the play on rhymes : )

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

This is one of my favorite poems, and there is a lit og truth to this story from my childhood.
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Creepy... me like! :D both the rhythm and the story are good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and comment on this piece.
Your complimen.. read more
Awarded 1st place in the poetry 101 Scary poetry contest.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Hi Trace! Reminds me of when we went
Spalunking under ground in West Virginia
through tunnels to a lake where Bats flew
around like Bats out of Hell... Young
people are Brave👿 and sometimes
scared too... Your poem is awesome
and so are you... truly,?Pat

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.
They mean the.. read more
The way you framed a story in verse is really interesting...
Hoping to see more..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.
Hope you have a wonderf.. read more
Second place winner in poetry contest.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved this amazingly written poem! It describes your childhood memories very well, and i really enjoyed reading this haunted house poem. Please write more!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this poem
I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Absolutely amazing. You have a talent for poems, and I had an absolute thrilling time ready your poem which sent shivers up my spine. Congrats.

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Trace

9 Years Ago

I am so glad you enjoyed my writing and greatly appreciate your wonderful compliments.

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Thoroughly enjoyable read. Nice work.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments.

Trace
and a fine ghost story it is too. Nothing like a great scary poem for the season! Thank you! A treat to read.

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Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and your wonderful compliments.

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