Fall

Fall

A Poem by Writing Writer
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Weird rhyme scheme where you take the different lines from stanzas you write and order them to make the whole poem; it turns out strange

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Falling leaves, frigid night

The full moon rises, the stars shine

The light sparkles down, a dim shaking light

The moon’s twin in the lake floats over brine

 

The full moon rises, the stars shine

They dapple the fallen leaves with light

The moon’s twin in the lake floats over brine

As it laughs with a bitter delight

 

They dapple the fallen leaves with light

Little white spotted bright pieces of flame

As it laughs with a bitter delight

A white faced reflection is smothered by leaves without aim

 

Little white spotted bright pieces of flame

Falling leaves, frigid night

A white faced reflection is smothered by leaves without aim

The light sparkles down, a dim shaking light

 

 

© 2009 Writing Writer


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I really like that! It's very creative. Thanks for posting!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is beautiful, I really like the lines about the moon's twin. The whole poem paints a really nice picture and I can imagine everything you described in it. Really good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hi, my name is Jessica, and as you can tell from my username, I like rock music. I'm currently working on a novel, but I frequently write poems and short stories for my humanities class, along with .. more..

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