Barrier

Barrier

A Poem by Rachel
"

We are all the type to hold it in and eventually we crack

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Breath of sullen air

And cry tears of pain

Weeping within yourself

And showing none among the outer limits that shall break

It ensues once more

And again

And again

And more

And more

And more often

I am the dam

I have the border that holds in the flood water

It thrashes within me

The water is heavy

It thrashes more

The crack starts

From top of the barrier

Down to the bottom

Droplets spray out in thick mist

The dam collapses

I cry

The barrier is destroyed

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Rachel


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I really enjoy this one.. bringing down one's barrier is incredibly hard for some.. and crying is human.. the words flow so nicely.. It almost makes me want to cry! Thank you for sharing!!!

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Added on March 8, 2009

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