Belief In A Life Of Beauty

I wrote this poem with my heart. Please enjoy it, and I hope you learn something out of it ~

I believe in a life of beauty. We take too many things for granted. We have a beautiful world around us, birds who sing beautiful songs in the lemon yellow dawn, through the wisdom full day of learning till the end of the thread at the rose red or lavender purple, sometimes even blush pink sunset. They didn’t just get here. Some believe they were crafted by the great god in six days, and he rested on the seventh day. Others, mainly scientists and followers of science believed our planet earth was created in a massive explosion in space, also brining the surrounding planets into existence. Respect other’s opinions, live in a world of harmony with no violence or insults. Just respect what others believe, even if it isn’t what you believe in. Enjoy the world around you, live your life in peace. Take your time, no rush is required. The slower, the more you will begin to realize the beauty. Rushing may damage the beauty, like if you run through a field of flowers; you may trample the rainbow wonders which provide life to the buzzing bees.  That’s another thing, if we keep trampling or killing flowers, that means no pollen, and no pollen means there’s no honey. Most people love honey, but some people take it for granted. When some people ask “Where did you get that honey from?” And they just respond “The shop!”, That is a massive example of taking it for granted. Bees work hard, to feed their queen and deliver honey to us and her. Moving on, there are no set rules of life, nor do you need to set yourself any. Just live your life in peace and happiness, just live it to the fullest and enjoy living the moment. Be grateful that you are a living breathing being, and don’t fear death. When it happens, most of us will go to the clouds above. A paradise, a better place it may feel at that point in time. Don’t fear it. Fear and worrying are the worst things someone could do to themselves. There is a solution to everything. Every cave has an exit. A golden rule to society is to treat others how you would like to be treated. Some people are sensitive souls, and can be easily offended, even if it was a joke. Think about other people, and treat them with respect. Finally, make sure that you love your planet, and protect everything around it the animals, plants, people, everything. Littering is a cause of pollution, choking hazard to animals and much more. Think of the bigger picture. Don’t let innocent animals die, or let the world get over polluted. Throw away or recycle your rubbish. Thank you. Wars and violence are unnecessary, if I was given just one wish in my entire life, I’d pick world peace.  It doesn’t matter if you are rich or poor.  Money can’t buy love, it can’t make you happy. Never compare money to the love of your family and friends. It doesn’t matter how rich you are, because everyone is a beautiful special person. Follow your heart, and let your emotions flow from it. Live your life, love much and be happy.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Darksummerswind]

Firstly, I really like the way you described the dawn and sunset using the different colors.
Secondly, I liked the connection you made between the pollen and bees but I think that you abruptly stopped before telling us what taking honey for granted has to do with anything.
Thirdly, I think that you just added some words at random in the end that slightly weakened your ending.

You had a strong beginning but a weak ending. Still it was nice to read and it came from what you believe in and that is something special.