Have You Lost Your Skittles?

Drew finds Candy... Well just read and see

It was a new day at evening when the sun was setting shooting out rays of colours across the sky like airplane tracks making their mark. Citrus orange and peachy pink lit up the sky like a candle. Drew was walking through the park with the wind gently blowing through his hair, gently like the feel of when Candy ruffled it with her dainty hands. Drew was just opening his eyes to see the the beautiful sunset but disaster struck...

 Sitting on the flower covered hill was a boy with Candy. He was clutching her hand tightly, and what Drew could see from his view, looked somewhat... romantic!  Next to them was a large bag of skittles, fruit flavour. The boy with Candy pulled out a red, strawberry skittle and placed it in her mouth. Candy giggled at him. Drew’s heart felt like it had turned to ice, melted, smashed and broken in half all at the same time. His eyes began to fill up with tears. He took a step towards them, and then back, and then forward. His final decision was to back away and run off crying. Many people stared at him thinking he was crazy. He finally reached the Rose Gardens, which were empty and quite as usual. They seemed to be his only quite get away...

Although his love seemed to be gone, he still loved her deep down inside him... he still loved her... Even if she loved that other guy now...

Author's Note

If you must criticize, constructive criticism only!

Reviews

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Aww gee that sucks, sad but good, like oooooooh! Something is up, girl!

[Raven Starhawk]

Hopefully she isn't two-timing him. >.> He seems like such a nice guy. I feel even worse for him now.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Turn towards tragic nice flow.

[Wilfre Salem williams]

Nice twist