2. Does This Make Us Friends?

2. Does This Make Us Friends?

A Chapter by WriterGirl101

            I wake the next morning feeling lighter, as if a huge weight was lifted off my shoulders. I smile to myself as I realize why. I had never talked about that car crash with anyone other than the cops. It felt strange telling Caine, a stranger practically, but yet, it felt nice too. Yawning, I hop out of bed and make my way to our one tiny bathroom to tidy up. I look in the mirror, admiring my looks.


            Sure, I’m not the best looking guy in the world, but I think I look alright. I’ve got straight black hair which hangs down over my right eye, I’m pale, but a few freckles dot my nose and cheeks, and my eyes are a blue, almost turquoise color. I’m a skinny guy but I’m much stronger than I look; I work out whenever I have the time and my weekend job usually requires a lot of heavy lifting. I do have abs; honestly, I do; but they’re barely noticeable.


            Sighing, I remove my clothes and step into the shower, using cold water to wake myself up. I shiver lightly as I step out to dry my hair, brush my teeth, and all the other boring essentials of life. All the while, I can’t keep a stupid grin off of my face. All I can think of is him; his bright blue eyes, his kind, generous smile, and the way he stood up for me when no one else ever has. I can’t wait to get to school in the hopes of seeing him again. Even if I don’t talk to him.


            I make my way to the kitchen next and make my mum and me some breakfast; eggs and toast with black coffee; the way we both like it. Mum wakes to the smell of the food and sits up groaning. She sleeps on a bed in the living room because we could only afford a one-bedroom house when we bought the dump. I insisted on taking the living room spot, but she told me she wanted the best for me and she wouldn’t take no for an answer. She even spent half her life’s saving to send me to the expensive Middleton High because she wanted me to have what she didn’t.


            My smile widens at the memory as I cheerfully hand over the plate and mug. She looks at me warily, not saying a thing, but hums as she digs in. Still smiling (damn man, am I really that pathetic???) I dig into my own while reading the local news. Nothing major really. As she finishes, mum hands over her dirty dishes and I wash them while silently humming to myself. It’s been so long since I’ve felt this good. How could one small act cause such an effect in me? It’s bloody insane.


“Alright, what gives darling? What’s got you in such a great mood?” Mum asks after a moment.


“Hmm? Oh, it’s nothing really, just a good morning.” I smile to her.


“Mhmm... Are you sure about that love?” She asks with a knowing smirk.


“Yeah, mum, I’m sure.” I tell her.


            It’s not that she’s opposed to my sexuality"she fully supports that decision"it’s just that I don’t really know Caine, and what happened yesterday was probably just a good guy doing the right thing. I don’t know if I’ll ever speak to him again, so I don’t want to tell my mum about it and get her hopes up for me. I’d like to think that Caine would become a friend, but in my life, I doubt it. So I just smile at a good memory, walk to the bus, and prepare myself for school. 


            The morning is as uneventful as always. I grab a plate and head over to meet my best and only friend here, Rebecca; the pretty ginger with wide green eyes and a beautiful, slim face. If I was straight, I’d probably date her. She smiles as I make my way over to our ‘loners table’ and shoves a coke my way as I sit down.


“Hi.” I greet, grabbing the drink.


“What’s up compadre?” She asks.


“Well, I have a few comments for that... Which one do you want?” I ask smirking.


“Ewe, none, I know you.” She giggles, stealing some of my bacon. “Have you seen the new guy? He’s cute.” She adds.


“Yeah, I’ve seen him.” I answer. “He’s sweet; and gay.” I add and chuckle as she chokes.


“Seriously, how do you know this?” She asks, glaring playfully.


“I’ll tell you later.” I tell her.


“Hmm, alright I wanna know everything. Can I come by your house today?”


“I don’t see why not. Mom will be working late again tonight though.”


            After a few minutes of banter, I see Caine enter the cafeteria on the other side, eyes scanning the crowd. I blush as they land on me and he waves. I wave back and he nods towards our table, asking permission to come over. ‘Wow, maybe I was wrong about him…’ I nod and he makes his way to our table. Because Rebecca is messing around with her phone, she doesn’t notice until he’s right there. He sits down, causing her to jump in surprise.


“Hey.” He greets with a nod to me.


“Hi...” I reply.


“You’re the new guy?” Rebecca asks in awe.


“That’d be me. Who might you be?” Caine asks in amusement.


“My name is Rebecca. I’m Jared’s best friend.” She answers.


“Ah, yes, he mentioned you yesterday.” He smirks my way. I blush deeper and he chuckles.


“So, you guys met yesterday… Anyone want to give me details?” She asks.


“Jerome was being a dick and Caine stepped in. That’s all there is to it really. We met and talked.” I answer sheepishly.


“What was he doing this time?” Rebecca asks angrily.


“It doesn’t matter.” I mutter.


“Yes, it does! You’re supposed to tell me these things.” She sighs, exasperated. “Fine, at least someone was there to stop him.” She adds. “Anyways! What brought you here, Caine?” She says turning to face the new boy.


“Well, I moved out of my parents last month and found a nice, cheap home here. I wanted to finish school though, too so I asked my parents to help me settle in here.” Caine explains.


“Ah, I see. That’s awesome. What did you move out for?” Rebecca asks.


“Becca quit interrogating the poor guy.” I chuckle. She frowns at me.


“No, it’s alright I don’t mind.” Caine replies, throwing me a wink.


‘Damn this guy. He’s totally flirting.’


“I moved out because I thought it was time. I have a job, a car, and soon I’ll be graduating, so I thought ‘why not?’, and my parents were supportive. They helped me a lot.” Caine adds, keeping his eyes on me.


“Why so late? It’s almost summer time.” Rebecca asks curiously.


“I had the money and found the perfect first house. I didn’t want to chance losing it so I decided to move right away.” Caine explains, finally looking back at her.


“Okay, nice. Hey, I’m going over to Jared’s house today, why don’t you pop by as well sometime?”


            Before Caine could reply the morning bell rang. I sighed and stood up, grabbing my things. “I’d love to come by if Jared will have me.” Caine states before walking to class. Rebecca pulled me into a hug. “He’s totally into you. Don’t push this one away.” She whispers.  I blush and rush off to my own after saying bye to my friends.


 ‘Whoa, did I say friends?’

 

            School is out; thank God. Rebecca and I meet up at the front of the school as I wait to board my bus. I’m not sure if Caine will ever actually show up at my house (damned insecurities), but I am hoping for it. It seems the more I see or think of him, the deeper I fall. I don’t understand it and it’s kind of scary. Rebecca is talking on her phone, arguing with someone. She huffs in annoyance and turns to me.


“Hey Jared, I won’t be able to make it tonight. My sister broke her arm and is in the hospital so I need to babysit while my parents are with her. I’m so sorry.” Rebecca says, apologetic.


“Hey, it’s cool, I understand.” I smile, lightly brushing her arm. “Hope your sister is alright.”


“Yeah, thanks. Maybe next weekend.” She chuckles, walking off.


“Hey, Jared; if you still want me to, I can come over in about two hours. I’ve got to go visit my grandmother first and help her with something.” Caine says, jogging up behind me next.


“Cool; that’s awesome.” I smile at him. That gives me time to make my house at least a little presentable.


“Alright.” He says handing over a slip of paper.


“What’s this?”


“Ah, uhm, I figured, ya know; my number… if you want it.” He says, fidgeting.


“Yeah thanks. Here,” I smile and write down my own number and Rebecca’s because I know she wouldn’t mind. “, here’s mine and Rebecca’s. Oh, and Rebecca won’t be able to come; family emergency. If you want you still can though.”


“Alright, sorry to hear the, but I’ll totally still be there. So... does this make us friends?” Caine laughs.


“If you’d like, then yes.” I smile.


            He nods before trudging off to his car and I step onto my bus.


Who is this strange boy?’ I wonder.



© 2016 WriterGirl101


Author's Note

WriterGirl101
Okay, so this chapter probably sucked but I've had a rough week so I'll go back and edit later. Reviews are awesome! They keep me going.

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Critique; (“Alright, sorry to hear the,) that

Review: The dialog is natural, you didn't force it as many people do, by natural I mean it sounds like a real conversation which is very good. Dialog is the hardest part of a story and to many writers try to get too much from it and it ends up sounds phony and forced, yours doesn't. The introduction of Rebecca adds depths of possibilities in subplots which only strengthen your story line. My only advice is to not rush the romance, as well as include activities that are not of a romantic nature to both, tease your readers as well as keep it light rather than tawdry. Still not a fan of romance but it is easier to read when it is written well :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WriterGirl101

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
I will go back soon and fix it. :)



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Sammy how could you not tell me there is more chapters. It is a good thing I checked because I am loving this. They are both so adorable and I love Becca's personality.

Posted 8 Years Ago


WriterGirl101

8 Years Ago

I'm so sorry!!! XD
But thank you very much. Lol
KittyKatgirl

8 Years Ago

You better feel guilty for not notifying me. XD

Lol you are welcome.
So, it starts out a very slow-paced chapter with getting ready in the morning, then it picks up speed just enough when at school. One suggestion: Put a line or something between huge breaks of time, such as the jump from lunch time to the end of school. Makes it a bit of a smoother transition by separating it. Otherwise, awesome! ^-^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WriterGirl101

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
I'll keep that in mind for next time!!
Critique; (“Alright, sorry to hear the,) that

Review: The dialog is natural, you didn't force it as many people do, by natural I mean it sounds like a real conversation which is very good. Dialog is the hardest part of a story and to many writers try to get too much from it and it ends up sounds phony and forced, yours doesn't. The introduction of Rebecca adds depths of possibilities in subplots which only strengthen your story line. My only advice is to not rush the romance, as well as include activities that are not of a romantic nature to both, tease your readers as well as keep it light rather than tawdry. Still not a fan of romance but it is easier to read when it is written well :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WriterGirl101

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
I will go back soon and fix it. :)

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