Irish Curse

Irish Curse

A Poem by WriterGirl101

The Irish island, green and gold,
holds a story long untold.
While children laughed and danced around, 
all the dead sleep, underground. 
For kids had caused the curse that the witch hath spoken,
a curse that, sadly, can not be broken.

The dead arise, and savor the screams.
They run around, killing people and dreams. 
When life and death are in folks eyes,
they try to save themselves through lies.
The dead had savored flesh and bones,
but when all is through, they return to the grave with groans. 
But then another child dances on graves,
it is another child that can not be saved.

For the witches curse can not be broken,
and her name for centuries remains unspoken. 
The Irish island, green and gold,
holds a curse, for it is told. 

© 2015 WriterGirl101


Author's Note

WriterGirl101
This is my first own, made up poem. Please tell the truth on if you like it or not... Thanks...

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I am an Irishman so I had to check this piece out and I really enjoyed it!
It is well written and has great wording that causes great imagery:)
You might think about submitting this into the rhyming contest, just a thought!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WriterGirl101

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm a huge Irish fan, and I'm definitely Irish at heart.. So, I tried my best to write at.. read more



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damn that's good!!! the rhyme and imagery is amazing and the story is great. short and sweet, what a treat

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I, too, am Irish and enjoyed this! Good work!
Please keep writing

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WriterGirl101

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
WriterGirl101

9 Years Ago

Ireland is like, my dream country, and it's my biggest dream and goal to be there one day. I've hear.. read more
I am an Irishman so I had to check this piece out and I really enjoyed it!
It is well written and has great wording that causes great imagery:)
You might think about submitting this into the rhyming contest, just a thought!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WriterGirl101

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm a huge Irish fan, and I'm definitely Irish at heart.. So, I tried my best to write at.. read more
It is difficult to go wrong when you use the first line as the title.
Your love of writing stories is clearly visible in this poem. The poem gives information, like a story. Can you give us the emotions of the story without giving us all of the details of the story? I like the inspiration of this poem, but I want the words to make me afraid. I want to 'feel' the words you share. Please keep sharing your inspirations and the emotions will surface. I look forward to being able to 'feel' what you write.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WriterGirl101

9 Years Ago

Thank you, while I am still a beginner writer, I try very hard. And I appreciate your tips. :)
Misery

9 Years Ago

You are truly welcome.

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