what would you do

I felt like most of my work was lirry, I wanted to do something sirius

what would you do

if a rock hit your home?

and the rock was from space,

how would you continue to live?

what would you do now if that rock was a bomb,

but not from space, a morbid gift from a fellow human,

would you know what to do then?

what would you do if that rock was diamond, but still it crushed your house?

would you rejoice, morn for your pet, or be torn between the two.

what would you do if the rock bounced off, not a single atom removed.

And instead of your house, it got the next door neighbors,

then what would you decide to do?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[hi]

ok i dont think i read a poem like this,i like it,it makes lots of questions bounce

[GalaxyGhost]

This poem is interesting in its own way. I don't know if you want a critique on grammar, spelling, etc, but I'll just focus on the message for now. My favorite line in this has to be: "what would you do now if that rock was a bomb?" Wow! That is powerful in transition from the start.

[DRAGO]

thank you________

[Keenan Angel]

This is writing. This is gold. Mind bending and inquisitive. Bravo to you.

[DRAGO]

ooh, I do love when my writing is compared to gold. Thank you!

[Keenan Angel]

You're welcome.

[William Liston]

When I read the first four lines of this poem, I thought 'this isn't going to be serious,' but then I kept reading, and line by line I was proven wrong. This is a thought-evoking poem. I like your use of rhetorical questions in this; it really made me wonder about my values such as how selfish I am, how I feel about the hardships of others' etc... I think you did well with this piece. Nice work.

-William Liston

[DRAGO]

ya, glad you could see that. It is meant to be sirius.

[AliciaB]

1. Move. 2. Move. 3. Sell it, and rebuild my house. 4. Let them stay over at my house.

[DRAGO]

thanks ___

[Pink Pastel]

Lol not move into that place ever again ha ha ha great poem.

[DRAGO]

thanks ____

[Pink Pastel]

Your welcome :)