I Silently Weep

Written for all those people that haven't found what they look for in a friend

 

I silently weep for my true friend to appear

To know me,

Understand me,

To love me without fear

I silently weep for my best friend to come

To hold me,

Console me,

And help me with that I've become

I silently weep every night for it to come true

Just a wish,

For some one,

I could say 'I love you too'

 

Author's Note

Nothing very intense. Just the results of 'one of those days'. Makes me want to sigh.

Reviews

[Marcy Simmons]

It does make you want to sigh! It made me wish for an old flame that disappeared out of my life 19 years ago - but I was young and foolish then -- oooohhhh - if i could relive those precious moments...your poem inspired me to think back to those days of foolish loves and romances that help shape us into who we are today! I loved your poem...

[*** Hey Jude***]

Your poem is very heartfelt and relateable. It wasn't until I stopped looking for love that it found me. You have a perfect someone out there that will treat you with love and truth. Hang in there. ~ Jude :-)

[Lunar Pup]

Its a very beautiful piece and I know the feeling of wanting someone to love you too...

[cquig]

This is a great poem. So clean and yet deep with emotion. I think we all silently weep for someone to be true to us, even when we seem to be surrounded.

[Bob]

It does well to convey a thought I'm sure we all have once in awhile, and does a good job both of conveying what is and isn't there at the same time, by showing us what you want and what is missing. I enjoyed it, good write. =)

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautiful, tender, moving softly as a gentle summer rain... The longing is so richly felt and speaks to the heart in the deepest way. Wanting the one who knows and understands... Wonderful write that connects so clearly to your readers...

[LadyNight]

I can really relate to this in a way great job sometimes one of those days written down can mean alot to you and many other people who read it. great job

[Lyra H]

It's so well expressed, you can really feel the emotions...

[ShaneBerry]

its short and to the point, i loved it!U^-^U